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Mihika

@banditqueenn.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I HAVE JUST ONE WORD !

IT WAS

"BEAUTIFUL ! " ...
Marvellous Piece Of writing I loved it To The Core !! xD

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

loved it to the MAX!!! Especially the ending😊

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winchfire

@winchfire

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

it was truly amazin!! even though it was out of her character sumtyms ppl r driven 2 da edge 2 do things wich dey normally dont!! so u hv 2 continue dis 1!! i cant wait wait 4 da nxt part!!

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Sexy Sobti

@--BSI-FaNaTic--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

😭 😭 Very Touching angel...

Excellent one 🤗 🤗 👏

Edited by BarunForever - 13 years ago

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Omg that was amazing could feel every feelings of her and almost cried with her

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Beautifully written 👏

Absolutely heart-wrenching. I could really feel Khushi's pain and it makes me want to cry and hug her tight at the same time. Please continue and put us out of our misery by making Arnav shower his love on her. She so deserves to be loved and happy.

Thanks for the email.

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Divya

@Divya1503

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

wonderfully written!!! had tears in my eyes while reading!!!😭 loved it hayley!!!🤗

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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

superb...

kushi's dialogues were so emotional...

i almost cried...but last two lines prevented me from breaking down...

excellent writing

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RASMI

@-carpediem-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

that was heartwrenching,but i loved it...

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invalid

@invalid

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Everyone, thank you so much for your responses... it all really means a lot ! I am glad you all felt the emotions I wanted to put across, and that it made some of you teary !

I am sorry for not writing a second part to this, but I feel that this One Shot is better as just that, a One Shot.

Lot's of Love and Hugs

Hayley x