Mr & Mrs Raizada first night conversation...out.VM

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nice😃
I realy wnt khushi 2 ques arnav..I jst dnt wnt hr 2 b al cryin..She needs 2 fight back.

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himabindu05

@himabindu05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

😊😊😊Love you🤗

I so want a conversation like this...u really know what I want Priya!thanx for this gift!

Believe me I really want Khushi to say this U.saw what u wanted to see U heard what u wanted to hear..that's wat happened...the cynic in him got the better of him..he always wanted that cynic to win...he had a relationship with that bitterness for so long that he turned the blind eye to his love!

u have caught the pain in khushis heart soo aptly...loved the way u have put it...why don't the cvs start showing some such meaningful talk between them?😕

Loved the part where u have said about the twinkling stars..and how they should bless them...Khushi believes so much in those stars!i really hope they show that scene😳

Keep doing more of OS...u have the right imagination and emotion to do it!

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mimi

@moon_mine

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

it ws jst amazing!!!!!

specially the end!!!!

it ws superb!!!!

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

beautifully written dearie!!! a very likely conversation!! sooner or later!! tempered with those awesome expressions and stances!!! 😃 the loveliest part was the twinkling stars!! oh yesss!! they are there, looking over their beloved children and smiling at them, blessing them!! knowing this was meant to be!!! and also knowing the love in their hearts will overshadow and overcome all else!! its just a matter of time!! 😍

a beautiful, touching VM once again you novice writer and VM maker!!! loved the dil bebasi mein chupke se rota hai part!! 😭
novice! ha! you know very well how good you are!!! 🤗

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Leah1
Good job, Priya!! and I so want a confrontation like this between Arnav and Khushi!!!

My advice: Keep writing, the novice writer will soon be one of the best OS writers of the IF!!!

thanxxx a lot Leah 😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sripriyan
good one dear...but honestly..i dont want their conversation to b like this...

thnxx...hw u want it to be ??? in reality they not even gonna hv a conversation mostly 😆

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: himabindu05
😊😊😊Love you🤗

I so want a conversation like this...u really know what I want Priya!thanx for this gift!

Believe me I really want Khushi to say this U.saw what u wanted to see U heard what u wanted to hear..that's wat happened...the cynic in him got the better of him..he always wanted that cynic to win...he had a relationship with that bitterness for so long that he turned the blind eye to his love!

u have caught the pain in khushis heart soo aptly...loved the way u have put it...why don't the cvs start showing some such meaningful talk between them?😕

Loved the part where u have said about the twinkling stars..and how they should bless them...Khushi believes so much in those stars!i really hope they show that scene😳

Keep doing more of OS...u have the right imagination and emotion to do it!

thanxx a lot dear 😊 loved that u liked it 😊😊

ya he is letting his mind rule him now...but now his wife will teach him...heart - the emotions are more essential in a marriage...

wanted to tell u smthng last nite...I have been having this feeling that he'll know the truth soon...maybe in the nxt week only...wat u think ?????

stars will someday play important roles I believe because they have always kept them as a peaceful reference or connection between Arnav nd Khushi...

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shwetachauhan
beautifully written dearie!!! a very likely conversation!! sooner or later!! tempered with those awesome expressions and stances!!! 😃 the loveliest part was the twinkling stars!! oh yesss!! they are there, looking over their beloved children and smiling at them, blessing them!! knowing this was meant to be!!! and also knowing the love in their hearts will overshadow and overcome all else!! its just a matter of time!! 😍

a beautiful, touching VM once again you novice writer and VM maker!!! loved the dil bebasi mein chupke se rota hai part!! 😭
novice! ha! you know very well how good you are!!! 🤗

thnnx hun 😊🤗

somehow felt that this song suits their present situation so well...

i am novice...gud ones are the real fanatics out there 😉😆

i am off shopping...catch up later 😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: taniks
Oh that was really lovely I loved the last bit ,khushi and arnav always look to them so y would they be looking down at their children. The last line 'this is just a bend not the end' all I can say is wow that was beautiful.

thannxxx dear 😊

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@.1.1.1.1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Beautiful but why do I hav a feeling dat he will be more physically abusive (no, not maar dhaar, typical husband one) then verbal, oh he's gona ignore her alrite. Silent treatment. Period. May God hav mercy on their souls.