Mr & Mrs Raizada first night conversation...out.VM

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Leah1

@Leah1

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Good job, Priya!! and I so want a confrontation like this between Arnav and Khushi!!!

My advice: Keep writing, the novice writer will soon be one of the best OS writers of the IF!!!

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sri7

@sri7

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

good one dear...but honestly..i dont want their conversation to b like this...

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

I told you honey.. You should keep writing OS and FF's.. This one is fabulous.. Thanks for the PM>

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Prathima

@prathikri

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Nice one Priya.. this is exactly how the conversion will play out.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Oh that was really lovely I loved the last bit ,khushi and arnav always look to them so y would they be looking down at their children. The last line 'this is just a bend not the end' all I can say is wow that was beautiful.

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swara.saxena

@swara.saxena

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

OMG!!! I so want this confrontation!! 😆

Gr8 work!! 👏

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DiamondLife

@DiamondLife

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

good prediction and i hope this open conversation happens which is unlikely

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _WASIM_
Lol

didnt get u ?

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zonera1

@zonera1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi priya!!!That was brilliant both VM n your OS👏!!

You should write more often!!I would love to read htem!!trust me that was so appropriate!!A clear portrayal of what's gonna come..of course it might b more angsty than this more lethal dialogues by ASR and more tears by KKG i mean KASR!!Whatever the scene wud b...Our bumpy ride has started so better b prepared for losts of angst and guilt!!