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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the story line pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone thanks for the people who actually read Unbreable,I have nearly 80 people on my list ,and 37 likes,a nd 16 comments, abit heartbroken,But im a possitve person .So i dont want to keep U waiting any longer..Enjoy .
BY the way its a very short Story :)
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The cold water shimmered in the open night sky .A sudden breeze flue the distance,making my weak differences body shake in fear..As the moons stuning light struck down were my tired body lay,giving me a souse of energy.my mind ached in pan.due to the horrifying thoughts which intruded my brain moments ago,a scream escaped from my mouth.my ears alarmed,hearing someones foot st approaching me slow and Steady.my eyes were wide open as the foot steps got closer and closer...

I was in shocked ,as my tired legs tried making there way across the cold hard floor.but there was no use ,he was now clutching my shoulder. A desire approach my mind.

I Took a look at his face, frightened, my eyes grew out of my eye sockets.Tears came rolling one by one.my mouth was quivering in fear.His touch lead my body numb.



Kushi! He scream in horror,what happened he looked at her in devastation.what had she become.a simple nod was enough for him to no that she was still conscious.but not even a nod.
her eyes were moist, a teardrop fell on his hand.her hazel brown eyes were in contact with eyes.slowly he slipped his hand under her back and lifted her from the back her knees.in a gentle motion he picked her defenseless body.her head was resting in his strong chest.she couldn't react to anything to to moments ago.the only think still awakened her from a her death sleep was his heart beats agains her ear.feeling safe and sound in his arms.wanting to stay in the arms of her lover was all she desired for.but new this was just for a Agee golden moments.

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she entered the hospital, everyone froze on arnav's yelling for the doctors. He held her with on hand, now her front half clashing to his chest.
He slapped the doctor against the wall, I need her to be safe got it! He scram. Still fear creeping up him, he needed hope.
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Passing back and forth,were is she Dammit ! He slapped his fist on the wall.next his head.not caring the blood slowly oozing down his forehead,he swiped it when the nurse exited from the Door.
Sir, shes been fiscally and mentally damaged.she's in peer pressure as she is still conscious but will not contact with anyone.
Can I please see her,I might..-please go fast the nurse exclaimed
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
awesome desar
continue soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Amazing start ..plz add me to pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update loved it can't wait to find out what happened continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
very veyr very very nice update but tooo short :(... plzzz continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Very Short, Still Lovely :) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
oh no oh no... poor khushi
who did this to her? she was not even nodding... hope arnav finds the culprit
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it please update soon and add as a buddy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
It ws beautifully written...
Amazing start...

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