Khushi's dupatta speaks

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Ur writing is amazing..leaves me in an awe!! Excellent work dear:) u really got into the mind of Khushi's dupatta lol

Loved this:

I'll slip here, I'll fall there

He'll hold me, She'll shy away

In Hindi soaps, dupatta theatrics

Are all you'll get of foreplay!

That is so true!!

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enigma17

@enigma17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

William Shakespeare, Byron and Keats eat your heart out!! Brilliant! Stupendous a dupatta with a life of its own! An oracle on love! A beautiful fluttering silent manipulator of love! I love it

'The reason I'm a little

Out of sorts today

Is because Sh(y)am touched me

I'd like to see him filleted

I maybe only a dupatta

But I have feelings too

I don't like being molested

By that Guru of cuckoo'

Way too funny the above. I am still chuckling

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

It was cutest dupatta version I've come across! Aww.

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lilmissmuffin

@lilmissmuffin

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Haha' so much for dupatta, loved the poem. I guess cupid did need some recognition.

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momma1128

@momma1128

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

It's about time the most important side character got a voice!! Well done.

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Arhimaniac

@Arhimaniac

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

lolz...lovely very nice...👏

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mpks1

@mpks1

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

@madmaxine, loved it. You have really expressed and written well how a dupatta would have felt... keep up the good work... looking forward to such fun post from you.