Os i hate to see you with some one else

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Posted: 13 years ago
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dont you guys killed me please


Khushi was busy dancing with NK , as he has invited her and she was Akash guest too

Arnav was looking at her for the bar stand. he just took one more glass. and walked to the stage

NK Naanav you will dance

Arnav: ha koi prob ha

NK: Naanav come one it is not that easy

Arnav: why

Khushi: looked at him .

NK: Naanav: you are alone you dont have a partner too.

Arnav: grab khushi hand in his "now "

NK: but

Arnav: shhh he just walk to the center

Khushi: aap na zaida pee le ha

Arnav: acha you know that he just run his finger on her face

Khushi: Arnav ji aap humara saath chala .

Arnav:no he just pull her back to him music started he just pull her to him.

Khushi: look at him she could feel he had not like her frankness with NK

Arnav:just placed his hand on her waist "karo " his breath brushes her neck

Khushi:"Arnav ji"

Arnav: Shhh placed his finger

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno he just pull her very close to him
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi " just tangle his fingers with her"
hoti kya hai jawaani suno"khushi look at him he was just dancing with the music"
ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi " he just twisted her and the pull her back to him"
woh bhi ek daur tha "khushi just felt his lips touches her as he pull her"
waqt hi aur tha "arnav looked at her"
jab woh the ajnabi" khushi just pull him aside could not see him like that"

Khushi: just hold him "kya hogaya ha aap ko"

Arnav: tum ko nahi pata

Khushi: nahi

Arnav: i hate to see you with someone else even that guy is my brother

Khushi: look at him

Arnav: i hated when you were engaged to some else .

Khushi: look in his eyes

Arnav: samjhe kya huwa ha much ko ,, for last one hour i am watching you dancing with him ,my head is breaking ,

Khushi: look at him his eyes has pain in it like he had when she told him she was engaged ."aap ghar chala"

Arnav: no i will not

Khushi: ok dont go home but come with me we both we go out see stars

Arnav: look at her

Khushi: chala

Arnav:hmmm

Khushi just hold his hand tight in her's and walk out she walk to the garden .

Arnav:here

Khushi: lets sit on the bench she selected near their car hold him from his waist

Arnav: walked with her

Khushi: thek ha hum aap ka cousin se ab baat nahi kara ga phir tou aap naraz nahi hoga na

Arnav: good shakes his head

Khushi: just smiled she felt he was over possessive about her

Arnav: just lay down placed his head in her lap

Khushi: just look at him

Arnav: my head

Khushi: just massage it "ab"

Arnav: fine woh dekho maa pointed at a star

Khushi: yes maa smiling at you

Arnav: why ? look in her eyes

Khushi:because you told the truth today

Arnav: acha he closed his eyes while holding her hand in his

Khushi: just look at him he was asleep. "aap ko itna bura lagta ha hum ko nahi pata tha" caress his hairs

Merry Christmas Merry Christmas





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res.. edited...

Yaaayyy me first!

Such a cute OS.. jealousy, spot on! Dialogues, spot on! And the last scene... No words to describe that.. very innocent, very subtle and sweet... He falls asleep in her lap, awww... And she caresses his hair... More awww...

Beautiful..
Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic

Res.. edited...

Yaaayyy me first!

Such a cute OS.. jealousy, spot on! Dialogues, spot on! And the last scene... No words to describe that.. very innocent, very subtle and sweet... He falls asleep in her lap, awww... And she caresses his hair... More awww...

Beautiful..

thx dear i am glad that you liked it ... they are so cute that when i write on them it became cute it self ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWW..Such a cute os😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey u just wrote it spot on. I mean i was just imagining the same u gave it words. I really want this all to happen.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very cute yaar
thanks 4 the brillant update dear
loveds it
arshi rock
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dont you guys killed me please

we will not kill you ,,,,, but i want to hit you
because ,,,you are amazing naddyia ,,,,,
whatever occur to your mind just write it ,,,,, because for us that must be very awesome
god bless you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sooo postve yr.. wow ! superb , tx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mera gaana, mera gaana le liya 😭
😆 just kidding buddy, didn't know u'll use it so perfectly.
Nice, short n sweet os yet sexy like d song. 😉
Buck up, keep them coming.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushshri

Mera gaana, mera gaana le liya 😭
😆 just kidding buddy, didn't know u'll use it so perfectly.
Nice, short n sweet os yet sexy like d song. 😉
Buck up, keep them coming.

i was not coming up with a song i asked you to help me😆i have stolen your song . your topic force me to come up with this😊

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