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Bubblii thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looks like your OS wasnt far off the mark!! 😲
...Can you see the future 😛 ? hehe x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bubblii

Looks like your OS wasnt far off the mark!! 😲

...Can you see the future 😛 ? hehe x



I am so happy shappy now! I made an OS about shoulder to lean & shoulder to lean is precisely wat we saw in today's episode. Wen in trauma for Kushi its always ARNAVJI & wat better place than his pool & garden. I am all blushing now 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wah wah...
u can see into the future !!
now u have to tell wats happening on monday!!
lol..
great work!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bubblii

Looks like your OS wasnt far off the mark!! 😲

...Can you see the future 😛 ? hehe x

I agree with you! 😊
Some of the scenes were almost like Angels had written in her OS.
That head on his shoulder scene was similar to what our friend portrayed here.
Her steps retracing themselves to the very room, she was familiar with, and mostly found herself in. Her heart knowing where she was going, but not at all giving her a chance to register her surroundings, while keeping her occupied with thoughts induced by it's very favourite companion, Brain!...
I wonder, if our dear Angels is any soothsayer or something?? teehee...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Hallo Angels, 😛

Thought of writing it as poem... ( I retain sole ownership of my poem(s), and other works of fiction, my dear friends.. So please DO NOT Alter, Reproduce, or Claim it as your own.)
I was looking for...

Those eyes that speak without any words,

Those breaths' slight music,

Those arms' warmth,

Those heart beats that reassured me to live and love,

That feeling of being safe...

I found something today,

That broke me from within;

I didn't know where I was going,

But my heart and limbs very well knew where to go;

Nothing, I saw in there, not even you,

Emptiness that it was, 'cause not even a glimpse of you;

Those hues that lay there in front,

Bearing everything silently,

Called onto me, because they knew how I felt..

A touch on my fingertips, was all that I wanted,

Because I could feel you in them,

Those pearls, I couldn't help, but let them flow

Because that is what I wanted to be, to be Free'

My heart called out, He is Here...

I was not sure, but yet I did what I wanted to do,

Fluttering them open, hoping against hope,

I saw the most beautiful, yet, vulnerable chocolate pools staring at me,

A dream, I thought, but my Heart knew well,

Oh, how long it had been,

Since I came across those eyes,

Since I could gaze into them, without any hindrance,

Without anyone to fear, without anything to think about...but those eyes, I loved to speak to...

'You're here!', my heart spoke.

Yes, that wasn't me, but Me... the Real Me;

I waited for you to say something,

But your nod was enough for me to believe,

'Don't Leave Me...', my Heart spoke once again, but with Me!

There'. I had said it, at last!

All these days, I hid it from you,

Avoided you, Feared that I may lose you..

Hah! I have already lost you..

But whatever that is left, I pray that we don't lose..

Whatever happened...I guess, that was meant to be..

But please, whatever is left,

Whatever bits I may have of us is what I truly want to treasure'

I have forgotten what the Past had,

I don't know what the Future holds,

All that matters, is those warm arms enveloping me,

Those eyes reading my soul,

That heart beat against mine,

That shoulder to rest on,

That calming breath of yours to calm me,

All that matters now is You and Me...

I don't know what came to my mind, but thought of penning it down, after reading your OS. I wonder if it makes any sense, cause I wrote it in a flow, as it came to my mind... Sorry for any errors.
Loved the OS. You are one Amazing writer!!
Regards
Annie 😃



hey annie dear just love ur comments. just like how here v try 2 analyze each episode u analyze & interpret my writings so well. I am touched that u put so much effort. Makes my day wen i read such comments 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looks like you were right on mark!!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu!!
A very touching OS hun...Loved it.
Hardly any words were exchanged, yet so much was said through feelings and expressions.
Fab job hun.
Thanks for the PM.
⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its amazing.liked it so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!!!!!
khushi's monologues were jst too good!!!!
love it...hw they feel each other's presence!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You were pretty much spot on!

Loved your scene, perfect blend of emotions, depth, feelings, understanding ... the dialogues were just apt. That's all they need.

continue visualizing them ... and treating us 😆

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