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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww, it was beautiful dear...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow it is wonderful and i loved it
the last lines are simply superb and it is nicely written to show a heart's cry and agony ..
love u anu for the pm and OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
that was beautifully written! awesomely done. very touching!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love the os totally amazing only if it was true so sweet thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hallo Angels, 😛

Thought of writing it as poem... ( I retain sole ownership of my poem(s), and other works of fiction, my dear friends.. So please DO NOT Alter, Reproduce, or Claim it as your own.)
I was looking for...

Those eyes that speak without any words,

Those breaths' slight music,

Those arms' warmth,

Those heart beats that reassured me to live and love,

That feeling of being safe...

I found something today,

That broke me from within;

I didn't know where I was going,

But my heart and limbs very well knew where to go;

Nothing, I saw in there, not even you,

Emptiness that it was, 'cause not even a glimpse of you;

Those hues that lay there in front,

Bearing everything silently,

Called onto me, because they knew how I felt..

A touch on my fingertips, was all that I wanted,

Because I could feel you in them,

Those pearls, I couldn't help, but let them flow

Because that is what I wanted to be, to be Free…

My heart called out, He is Here...

I was not sure, but yet I did what I wanted to do,

Fluttering them open, hoping against hope,

I saw the most beautiful, yet, vulnerable chocolate pools staring at me,

A dream, I thought, but my Heart knew well,

Oh, how long it had been,

Since I came across those eyes,

Since I could gaze into them, without any hindrance,

Without anyone to fear, without anything to think about...but those eyes, I loved to speak to...

'You're here!', my heart spoke.

Yes, that wasn't me, but Me... the Real Me;

I waited for you to say something,

But your nod was enough for me to believe,

'Don't Leave Me...', my Heart spoke once again, but with Me!

There…. I had said it, at last!

All these days, I hid it from you,

Avoided you, Feared that I may lose you..

Hah! I have already lost you..

But whatever that is left, I pray that we don't lose..

Whatever happened...I guess, that was meant to be..

But please, whatever is left,

Whatever bits I may have of us is what I truly want to treasure…

I have forgotten what the Past had,

I don't know what the Future holds,

All that matters, is those warm arms enveloping me,

Those eyes reading my soul,

That heart beat against mine,

That shoulder to rest on,

That calming breath of yours to calm me,

All that matters now is You and Me...

I don't know what came to my mind, but thought of penning it down, after reading your OS. I wonder if it makes any sense, cause I wrote it in a flow, as it came to my mind... Sorry for any errors.
Loved the OS. You are one Amazing writer!!
Regards
Annie 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing. love the way they feel each other .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Awww this was sooo emotional 😭
...If only such scenes were really apart of IPKKND...maybe one day... but for now I'll continue to enjoy your writing 😃
Great OS x

Thanks for the PM 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW ...beautifully written 😃 thanks for d pm dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice os ..well written ..loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great OS...and very well written...loved it

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