IPKKND: Halvai Ki Dukaan - Page 4

Great OS!!!!
I like how u incorporated K3G...I love that movie...I won't think of that scene the same anymore...I am still blushing...arnav can work some magic that is all I am going to say

Originally posted by: aakriti120

wow...that was awesome...very well written..thanks for the pm..:)

So glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: amiee125

Wooow..the k3g went along with the story soo well! Really great update 😊

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244

SRK-Kajol Bollywood's Best, ArHi/SaRun Tellywood's Best!!! 😉 Loved da O.S.It was hottt!! 😳

So glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: booksfreak07

Really cute!
You know the other day, I was watching the scene where khushi said sorry to him for the tea dropping fiasco and the kajol-K3G-gamla scene was the first thing that came to my mind!!! 😆

Yeah when I first saw that I thought of K3G as well :D

Originally posted by: sushi-la

this was so great!! I always get reminded of Arnav and khushi everytime I watch/think of K3G...after all, humari K2G kisi se kam nahi!! 😉

Originally posted by: smitar

Wah! Lost for words!😉

Originally posted by: tinsel

Brilliantly written OS,👏

Originally posted by: preethi12345

nce one !

Thank you all! :D

NICE

just loved it!!

Beautiful, just beautifully written👍🏼

aww! that was awesome Shuey!! I loved it!! Something not sad was totally necessary!

Originally posted by: aparna5293

Beautifully written nayika.
U rope the song and dialogues with os. Amazing.
I want ur all work. Ur fab writer

Thank you so much! So happy you like all my work.

Originally posted by: MoNayaKiDeewani

a very well thought concept, K3G went really well! Lovely OS, I always look forward to your work.<3 keep it up :)

Glad you liked it! :DD

Originally posted by: egle

That was so tastefully written. Mature content doesn't always have to be raunchy and you proved that so well 👏

Aww thank you. I don't think I could do raunchy if I tried! Too much second hand embarassment :P

Originally posted by: amreenshameem

😉 😳

Originally posted by: arhiforever

Simply awesome! Loved the concept...Keep writing...

Originally posted by: MissButterfly

Oh my!! That was so beautifully written <3 The K3G dialogues were Sone Pe Suhaaga :)

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Brilliant! K3g is one of my fav

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Lovely OS!!
I'm just drowned in it!😍

Thanks so much :)

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

some might say that u have ruined the K3G scene for them but i'll say you've made it ten times better for me!!! awesomely done! i couldnt have asked for something better when Arnav mentioned Halvai!!!

Hey who's saying I've ruined the scene for them? :PPP It took me ages to get what Rahul meant about 'halvai ki dukaan' because obviously when I first watched the film I was quite young. But then eventually when I got it the scene was actually a lot more enjoyable :P

Glad you liked it! I decided for once to take Arnav's attempt at an insult and turn it into a happy OS rather than a sad one.

Originally posted by: crazy44

it was awesome,
loved the way you syncd with the muvies dialouge!
and i guess you should make a diffrent account for people who love to read all of your like me, and wait dEsPerately for updated :)

Thanks so much :D

Yeah it took me so long to get the timings right, I had to watch the scenes like a million times.

Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

Luvd ur OS Nayika ... it was mind blowing ... best part is that it merged so well with my fav scene frm K3G ... haiii Arnav n Shahrukh ... both r to die for 😉

Aww thank you, glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Like the way you made the movie a part of the story. Great job.

Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: nyxx

WOW ☺️ Wayyy to HOT Nayika! Lovedd the combo of SRK-KAJOL and ARNAV-KHUSHI. 😉

and about the pms, whatever is easiear for you. But no matter, Im definitely reserving a spot on any of youre pm list!. 😃

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it :DDD

Originally posted by: Shina_srkfan

oh WOW WOW WOWWW!!! dis was AMAZINGGG!

Originally posted by: cpervaiz

Omg...this was really hot

Originally posted by: sparsh27

gr8 workk

Thank you all! :D

Originally posted by: Smileyface

this was awesome!

haha i love K3G!! and that scene is really cute!!

u just made a sweet innocent scene into a hot sexy one hahaha!!!

this totally made me blush!

nayu ur awesome! write more OS's! =D this is such a relief from all the depressing ones that are being written in the past few days haha!!

xox

hershi

Thank you so much!

Hey that scene isn't so sweet and innocent once you figure out Rahul really means! ;)

Originally posted by: Lov26

Very creative, loved the OS.. Now whenever i will watch that part in the movie, i will think of this OS and Arnav & Kushi :-)

Aww so glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: capriya

nice part...continue soon...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Shuheda!!

I loved this.

I'm a sucker for dreamy scenes, so a romantic and happy OS is always welcome!!

This one was fantastic.

I love the way Arnav very cleverly worked his way on Khushi...super hot!!

Thanks for the PM sugar.

⭐️

Glad you liked it! I figured I've reached my quota for angst-filled fiction for the week :P

Originally posted by: SiRul

Waooo 😍 they r the SRK & kajol of tellywwod

:)

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Simply Brilliant...I now have a new meaning for the CLASSIC scene...in a CLASSICAL andaaz!!!😉

Thank you :DD

Originally posted by: Zeee

wow! beautifully written. i could imagine the scenes and the film OMG!

xxx

Thanks! Glad you liked it :)