OS: He Doesn't Make Me Cry - Page 4

Originally posted by: SiRul

Waooo :D loved itt but felt sad fr arnav

Originally posted by: ChicagoCarole1

Oh so sad...feel so bad for Arnav...

Originally posted by: egle

sad.. but well written 👍🏼

Originally posted by: ipkkndank

Lovely OS

fabulous :-D

really love it

Originally posted by: sarach

it was really nice..a sad one..but written very beautifully.

Originally posted by: savvz

wonderful job...⭐️

Thank you everyone!

Originally posted by: sushipie01

This was so good! I wish Khushi would act this way in the show to teach Arnav a lesson!

Wonderful OS! :D

Thank you! I do to, but she's such a sucker for punishment in the show

sad but awesome !!! loved it !!! Arnav got the punishment wht he deserved..👏.

I love how khushi used his own line against him

Originally posted by: anita_21492

I love how khushi used his own line against him

Thanks! That was the line that was supposed to be 'at least he doesn't make me cry' but it didn't really flow well so I changed it.

Originally posted by: rumu

sad but awesome !!! loved it !!! Arnav got the punishment wht he deserved..👏.

hope it doesn't happen in the show!!!.🤢. 😔

i love Khushi and Arnav a lot ,,no matter what happens they should be together...i can't see them apart. 😊

Thank you!

Yeah there's no chance that they'll be separated for real on the show.

Sad os. But the title goes with it perfectly. Thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

Sad os. But the title goes with it perfectly. Thanks for the pm!

Thanks so much! I like the title, it was the only reason I wrote this OS but then in the end I ended up not even using the line in the actual story lol.

Awesome update! Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: malluangel

so beautiful, yet so lovely...
sigh. arnav and khushi are going to be 50 by the time they admit this shit arent they...

Thanks!

Yep, we should be grateful it's not a Balaji show or they'd be married to about 4 different people and have 10 kids each before they even confessed! :P

Originally posted by: ROOHI2009

😭 aww so sad!!!

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great OS!

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Very nicely written.
luvd it!!

Originally posted by: soni4eva

luvly os beautifully written x

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

Awesome update! Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: rbarretto

awesome os...

Thank you all so much! :D

Nicely written I enjoyed it very much.

KF