OS: He Doesn't Make Me Cry - Page 2

Originally posted by: MissButterfly

You should be a book author, you know! You're damn good. I loved this one the most out of all the others you wrote.

Aww thank you! I wish I could be!

Originally posted by: hirushinz

Lovely OS. Arnav is getting his own medicine for a change and I love it 👏

Glad you liked it :D

Originally posted by: MayaK

Wonderful job, I loved it👏

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: Zeee

beautifully written. i love angst and this is perfect

xxx

Thank you!

You've written this beautifully...I liked it not for its story as such more for the way u wrote it👍🏼

Awesome OS, Bitter Sweet Revenge⭐️

Sad Os for me!! 😔
I know Kushi's decision is correct and it makes her stand good!
But still, it hurts you know.. At end story is a story, I felt the impact though I enjoyed it reading.😛

gosh i feel so sad for arnav

Originally posted by: soho19

Props, love! It was bitter and sweet. A perfect OS for the situation right now. Loved it. Wonderful!

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it :D

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

ur really depressed huh? ur bringing me down too nayika!!! boo hoo hoo that was so sad!

No, don't be sad! I'm not depressed so much as annoyed with the story. It's just not going how it should in my opinion really. I promise I'll write something happy next!

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

This was spectacular Shuheda :)

I loved the simplicity of it all <3 But my favorite bit was when she asks him: "Did you?" There's something so heartbreakingly beautiful about that line <3

xoxo

Aanya

Aww thank you! :D

Originally that line was supposed to be 'At least he doesn't make me cry' like in Ocean's 11 and Bluffmaster but it didn't really seem right to me so I went with 'did you' instead but I still like that line so that's why it's the title :D

Originally posted by: lexaxel

You've written this beautifully...I liked it not for its story as such more for the way u wrote it👍🏼

Thank you so much! Glad you liked my writing :)

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

good one

Originally posted by: tinsel

Awesome OS, Bitter Sweet Revenge⭐️

Originally posted by: Sophie83569

Emotional. I loved it ~Sophie 😳

Thank you all :D

i loved every bit of it...i am kinda mad that arnav still refuses to believe that he hates to hurt khushi and he continues to do it...so unfortunately, a realization of LOVE is very far away...I guess for this reason reading storylines like yours where Arnav is dying on the inside after seeing khushi with another man gives me sadistic pleasures..hehe

too much angst? what can i do? i love sobti too much. could it be my frustration that I can never meet him in person to tell him how much i love his acting and his expressive eyes?? maybe. I don't know...but that tale is for another day.

getting back to the post..(sorry for side tracking 😆) I love your story! please PM me if you ever decide to update this :)

Originally posted by: sushi-la

i loved every bit of it...i am kinda mad that arnav still refuses to believe that he hates to hurt khushi and he continues to do it...so unfortunately, a realization of LOVE is very far away...I guess for this reason reading storylines like yours where Arnav is dying on the inside after seeing khushi with another man gives me sadistic pleasures..hehe

too much angst? what can i do? i love sobti too much. could it be my frustration that I can never meet him in person to tell him how much i love his acting and his expressive eyes?? maybe. I don't know...but that tale is for another day.

getting back to the post..(sorry for side tracking 😆) I love your story! please PM me if you ever decide to update this :)

Yeah he just frustrates me at the moment. I don't understand how he can be 26/28 and not realise what his feelings are. A 10 year old could figure it out by now!!

Haha, no need to apologise for side tracking. Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: cpervaiz

gosh i feel so sad for arnav

why is everyone trying to make arnav pay in their OS's

anywayz an awsome another one.

Aww sorry to make you sad! I'm just annoyed at the writers of the show and taking it out on Arnav. I would take it out on Khushi but she cries so much on the show anyway that I don't want to have her crying in my stories too :P

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Sad Os for me!! 😔
I know Kushi's decision is correct and it makes her stand good!
But still, it hurts you know.. At end story is a story, I felt the impact though I enjoyed it reading.😛

Thank you so much. I know it hurts but what can you do? :P

Originally posted by: tina_1234

beautifully written...nyc one dear

Originally posted by: moon_mine

loved it!!!!!!

too emotional!!!!!

Originally posted by: -Garima-

That was amazing Nayika! (: Sad but so well thought out! Amazing work!

--Garima

Originally posted by: arhi-sarun-fan

As always superb👏😃

Thank you all!