IPKKND: Lies - Page 4

Originally posted by: lwfw

sorry to hear about your Motion sickness. hmm try having a mint kinda chocholate in the mouth i have heard it helps 😃

aww so you are giving exact reason why ASR made blah his GF .
hmm hope so. i always thought blah being in his life was a calculated move from him. But i do wonder was it just because how much ever he is ASR he does like to be fussed over and he never said anything when blah went to help him with coat or tie

loved the way you had monologue of blah and arnav.
yeah by bringing in blah ASR ensured that kushi will not be able to break that barrier 😈 the question is situation may make himself break that barrier 😍 i am waiting 😃

thanks for the pm

I usually chew mint chewing gum and that helps a bit.

Yeah I needed there to be an explanation for why Arnav would even date someone like Lavanya who acts so airheaded sometimes.

Originally posted by: malluangel

oy! so sad na?
yeh arnav asr ki beech mein bechari khushi...and more importantly, ME! 🤔

I know, poor Lavanya and Khushi :(

Originally posted by: littlemoi

that was fantastic!

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved this OS! Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

very nicely written😊

Originally posted by: sarach

wowww.loved it..this one is truely amazing

Originally posted by: arhi-sarun-fan

Thanks for the pm😊
very nice and interesting

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Really nice...

Thank you all so much! :)

great OS...loved the way you wrote...fantastic

Originally posted by: -Garima-

Aww, so unique! :)

Nayika, I honestly love all your story ideas - may I please have your thoughts transferred in my brain so I can actually write something on Arnav&Khushi and get rid of this damn writer's block? I will love you forever. Like actually.

LOL! Jk, but seriously you are freaking amazing. Those bus rides must be very adventurous! ;) I really loved how Arnav's thoughts completely contradicted Lavanya's and it showed how two people who are together are not meant to be. So well written and though out.

Omg, poor you! :( Motion sickness sucks! I have it too when I'm in the car or bus but not as much, lol but at least the bus makes you think of these awesome stories! LOL who knew there would be perks to a bus ride? ;)

--Garima

Thanks so much!

Haha, I wish you would! Sometimes I have too many ideas and not enough time to develop/write them. Oh I definitely udnerstand writer's block and I refuse to believe people who claim it doesn't exist. I had the worst case of writers block for about a year where I had abos**tely no motivation to write anything and if I did, it was all crap!

Originally posted by: bhavnah

grt update dr 👍🏼

thnxx for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: sruthirishi

well written 👏

loved it ..😃

&thk u for PM.

Thank you all!

Originally posted by: smitar

WAAH! Superb! Truly, Arnav is hiding behind Lavanya. La's (mis)reading of incidents and her thoughts are spot on.

If u get such wonderful ideas while travelling by bus n suffering motion sickness, maybe u should take longer trips!😉 Just a joke! Don't kill me!

So glad you liked it and you thought they were spot on :)

Well I have to travel for an hour every time I go to uni so... :P

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Really nicely explained

True to the core

It's soo visible that Arnav is using Lavanya as his shield against reality, but the question is for how long, is he capable of conquering all feelings a common man would have for the woman who he really has fallen hard on...

Time has to answer I guess 😳

Thanks for the Pm 😉

Thank you!

Yeah, let's hope once he learns about Khushi's engagement he can't hide any more!!

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

loved it darlin... it's short but i know you're busy with studies!

looking forward to more of your work soon

lots of love 🤗

Thank you! Yeah hopefully my other stories will be longer when I have a bit more time.

Originally posted by: monsi08

Hey Nayika...
I am with u on the motion sickness part... I felt i was reading my own story 😆
But with the only difference that I listen to music in the Bus... And i ABSOLUTELY DO NOT get any brilliant OS ideas in my mind like urs 😆😆😆

Anyways jokes apart.😃.. I really liked this OS... in fact you have told us what LA deciphered from each of Actions in the past in just one-liners... Loved the writing style ... really very nice... 👏


Cheers,
Monsi

Haha, well I can only listen to really slow songs, anything more than that gives me a headache. I'm sure you could if you thought about it hard enough!

Glad you liked it! :DD Lavanya's not worth more than one line at a time. She annoys me so much, going back and forth from being a bimbo to not and I don't know how to feel about her.

Originally posted by: ashvez

@Nayika...that was lovely.No Khushi...yet Khushi slopped all over Arnav.She is within him...in every thought.So, in a way we din't mis her.

Great work ...as always.Love your work.

Please do Pm me in furture .Thank You😊

Ash.

Thank you so much! :D

If you've sent a Buddy Request, I will most definitely PM you :)

Originally posted by: nayika

I'm so glad you liked it! Unfortunately that's just how Arnav is (or how I see him at least :P) He's a huge liar to himself and won't be able to reform until he starts admitting some truths!

Next up I'm going to have to write a story on Shyam!! ;)

Originally posted by: stillunwritten

That'll take a looong time. Every time he takes a step towards admitting the truth to himself, something or the other happens and he takes like three steps backwards. It's a never-ending cycle of lies! Someone needs to slap some sense into the guy!

NOOO! Okay, unless your story involves Shyam and accident and/or death together, I refuse to like it! I'm taking a stand against this :P

btw..do you have a tumblr? I'm following a person with the same name/id as you..and I just realized that today.

Hopefully it'll be Khushi who does the slapping!

I'm going to write it and there will be no death and you will STILL like it!

I do! It's probably me, I'm just 'nayika' all over the internet! :P Send me a PM with yours and I'll follow too! :)

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

that was beautiful nayika! you have stripped Arnav down to the bare minimum and shown what he truely is... a coward!

Thank you! I don't like to think of Arnav as a coward but unfortunately he is... :(

Originally posted by: srahs

fab update

thankx for pm

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: SiRul

Awesome amazing waoo every feelings of asr are here

Thank you!! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: stillunwritten

Ahh, how awesome would it be if Khushi Kumari Gupta slaps him? I can already picture it.

I will not like it. I refuse to. You simply cannot write a story where Shyam is the good guy, it's unacceptable!

Haha, yea. It is you! I just saw a whole lot of Arnav/Khushi on my dash. Lol, I feel like such a stalker now. I swear I'm not! haha

here's mine : theendingsunplanned.tumblr.com (:

and now I'm going to stop spamming your OS thread.

Oh I could never resist a challenge! (I'm writing it as we speak :P)

...Are you sure? i wouldn't mind if you were :P

Spam away! It makes me feel popular, haha,