IPKKND: Lies - Page 3

@Nayika...that was lovely.No Khushi...yet Khushi slopped all over Arnav.She is within him...in every thought.So, in a way we din't mis her.

Awesome amazing waoo every feelings of asr are here

that was beautiful nayika! you have stripped Arnav down to the bare minimum and shown what he truely is... a coward!

Originally posted by: nayika

I'm so happy for you! :P

So glad you liked it! :D I'm sure there were other events between Arnav and Lavanya I could have added if I had the time to go back through the episodes but unfortunately I didn't :(

Originally posted by: nayika

I'm so happy for you! :P

So glad you liked it! :D I'm sure there were other events between Arnav and Lavanya I could have added if I had the time to go back through the episodes but unfortunately I didn't :(

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

I totally know what you mean about the motion sickness. It's awful. I usually have my iPod to help...it works wonders. I can't even text when I'm in the car...I hate it!!

Coming back to the OS...

It was fantastic sugar!

Loved the way you've written it.

Thanks for the PM.

😊

I can only listen to music if it's sort of soft songs nothing too rock-y really :(

Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

This was really good, even though Khushi wasn't in it that much. It really describes what Arnav would feel and how he would act, and has stayed true to his character.

Keep up the good work, Nayika!

Thank you! Yeah I tried to sort of come up with reasons for Arnav doing the things he's done or expanding on the ones we already had.

Originally posted by: stillunwritten

*gets ready with my chappal* I kid, I kid :D

When you said you'll write a one-shot on them and that I'll like it..I thought you meant you were going to write a happy one!! The greatness of loopholes, I suppose. But you were right..I do like it! I love it, actually. But I kind of hate the Arnav in the story :P haha!

I love the whole 'timeline' fashion in which you've written. To actually know what Arnav was thinking when all of those scenes happened give their story so much depth! Unfortunately, that's another thing the CVs are bad at.

@your motion sickness- do you have to travel by bus everyday? :( If yes, then I feel so bad for you!

Haha, don't you just love a loophole?

I'm so glad you liked it! Unfortunately that's just how Arnav is (or how I see him at least :P) He's a huge liar to himself and won't be able to reform until he starts admitting some truths!

Next up I'm going to have to write a story on Shyam!! ;)

I hate motion sickness...this os was really good
Thanks for the pm

nice one...conrardiction of thoughts!!!!