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@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: deeps_92
asma di...
oops...it was well written...

so emotional...

u wrote it in asr pov...loved it...

though i know that asr is very rude to her and every thing is his mistake...

i always take his side...

and i make myself believe that he is good...

cont ur work di

Thanks so much hun, glad u loved it😳 Yep so far all my OS hav been written from his pov cos i like to try and understand him - hopefully i've done an ok job of it but he's such a complicated person!!

Will carry on when i can x

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shybabe

@shybabe

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Really loved ur OS honey!👏 poor arnie boy! He is so confused😕

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

just love you OS . plz pm me . i missed this

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jennylives85

@jennylives85

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

@anjaani...Your writing has so much clarity...really CRYSTAL CLEAR, is very crisp and has superb continuity of thoughts, it's like one beautifully strung out garland...doff my hat to you👏...you really should be in Creative Writing !!

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: jennylives85
@anjaani...Your writing has so much clarity...really CRYSTAL CLEAR, is very crisp and has superb continuity of thoughts, it's like one beautifully strung out garland...doff my hat to you👏...you really should be in Creative Writing !!

Hi😳 thanks for ur sweet words, glad u enjoyed it and im happy that u like my writing so much! I wud love to have a career in writing but my ideas arent so good lol!

Anyways, thanks for reading x

Asma😊

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Oh man i'm in love with you'r writing. I love the simplicity in your writing. You are brilliant ! This was superb. Loved reading Arnav's point of view. Pleas write more. Please start a FF on Arhi. I would love to read it.

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Asma, you are such a wonderful writer! (:

I've read your previous one shots, but I don't think I ever commented on them, but I have to say you're an amazing writer. Whatever you write always leaves a wonderful feeling in me, it's so real. I'm not sure if that made any sense though :P lol. This OS was very accurate as to how Arnav must have felt. Awesome job! (: Can't wait to read more from you!

--Garima

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

this was so good...i love arnav's point of view!!!

thanks a ton for the pm

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -Garima-
Asma, you are such a wonderful writer! (:

I've read your previous one shots, but I don't think I ever commented on them, but I have to say you're an amazing writer. Whatever you write always leaves a wonderful feeling in me, it's so real. I'm not sure if that made any sense though :P lol. This OS was very accurate as to how Arnav must have felt. Awesome job! (: Can't wait to read more from you!

--Garima

Hi Garima! Wow thanks for ur comments, i'm kinda speechless by them😳 I'm glad that you enjoy my scenes and thanks for commenting this time. Also, i think it does make sense, i sometimes get lost in things when i read cos when the writer is good they can make it seem so real but i cant believe my writing makes you feel like that?!

I hope that it was accurate to how Arnav was feeling, he's a compicated kinda guy (to say the least) so hopefully i'm getting it right!

Thanks again for your sweet words, will write more when i can😊

Edited by anjaani07 - 13 years ago