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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi everyone🤗 I wrote another one shot and I'm not sure if this one is really any good sorry, nothing much really happens, it was just in my head after yesterday so I wrote it down. It takes place right after ASR comes home from their 'bandage engagement' and is a look into his thoughts (how I imagine them to be anyway!)

Thanks,

Asma😳

*NOTE: Link to an Index of my other work:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2240859/asmas-asr-madness-an-index

This OS has now been moved to my blog - please PM me for details!

Asma x

Edited by anjaani07 - 12 years ago

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

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Posted: 13 years ago

aaasmaaa you always make me senti with your os's 😍

my heart goes out for arnie boy in fast pace thanks to your beautiful writing. i feel really sorry for him & his actions although they confuse me. he wants happiness for her isn't it? although he hurts her? gosh this is super insanely intense! you have successfully mystified me once again!

love u mwaaah!!! keep writing more & more & more love 🤗

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
aaasmaaa you always make me senti with your os's 😍

my heart goes out for arnie boy in fast pace thanks to your beautiful writing. i feel really sorry for him & his actions although they confuse me. he wants happiness for her isn't it? although he hurts her? gosh this is super insanely intense! you have successfully mystified me once again!

love u mwaaah!!! keep writing more & more & more love 🤗

Thank u thank u i was worried this one was no good cos nothing really happened! Yep its all insanely intense and crazy and even i cant make sense of it altho i keep trying😉

Love u and thanks for always reading🤗

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660428

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Posted: 13 years ago

I really love your OS's, they just mean so much, and yet aren't exactly that long and always keep me wanting more! I totally felt for Arnav, confused, not understanding anything but yet, understanding everything, if only he wasn't sooo disillusioned! *sigh*

And then, I really like that Anjali wasn't as dumb as they show her to be in the serial! I mean, she is supposed to read her brother, but I guess Shyam has clouded her vision, after all, she DID agree to marry him, even AFTER seeing his face!

I am getting off track, so back to track, great OS! I loved it!

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: storybooksgd
I really love your OS's, they just mean so much, and yet aren't exactly that long and always keep me wanting more! I totally felt for Arnav, confused, not understanding anything but yet, understanding everything, if only he wasn't sooo disillusioned! *sigh*

And then, I really like that Anjali wasn't as dumb as they show her to be in the serial! I mean, she is supposed to read her brother, but I guess Shyam has clouded her vision, after all, she DID agree to marry him, even AFTER seeing his face!

I am getting off track, so back to track, great OS! I loved it!

Thanks for ur comment, means a lot because i was unsure about it!

Glad u loved it and I had a laugh at the part in bold😆 I do hope they start showing Anj with a brain cos i would love to see her help him sort out his feelings...

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BIackSwan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaani07

Thank u thank u i was worried this one was no good cos nothing really happened! Yep its all insanely intense and crazy and even i cant make sense of it altho i keep trying😉

Love u and thanks for always reading🤗

come on sweetie pie there's no room for boredom when you write an os! this one was simply awesome & bang on just like your other work

love u more & more & more 🤗

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660428

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaani07

Thanks for ur comment, means a lot because i was unsure about it!

Glad u loved it and I had a laugh at the part in bold😆 I do hope they start showing Anj with a brain cos i would love to see her help him sort out his feelings...

Your welcome! But your stuff rocks! You should really post more of it!

I know, matlab, Sham ki maindak waali shakal dekh kar toh meri MOM bhi bura mooh banati hain! Anjali, ka nah toh dimaag theek se kaam kar raha, aur nahi aankhein! But, pehle toh woh theek hi thi, and now suddenly, she doesn't see ANYTHING! Bechaare Anrav ko pyaar kaun samjhayega?

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely dear all from Arnav's POV which is something I really appreciate 👏

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Asma

@anjaani07

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: storybooksgd

Your welcome! But your stuff rocks! You should really post more of it!

I know, matlab, Sham ki maindak waali shakal dekh kar toh meri MOM bhi bura mooh banati hain! Anjali, ka nah toh dimaag theek se kaam kar raha, aur nahi aankhein! But, pehle toh woh theek hi thi, and now suddenly, she doesn't see ANYTHING! Bechaare Anrav ko pyaar kaun samjhayega?

Lolzz i know exeactly what u mean about the creepazoid! Lets hope Anjali gets some sense in time to show her buddhu brother the light😉

Aww im gonna say thank u again😳 and also a biiig🤗 for being so sweet! I will post more when i can, just dont have to time to start an FF so it's easier for me to take a couple of hours and write an OS. As long as people like it, i'll write!