OS-- RUK JAO KHUSHI!!

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Janhvi

@Bindani

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Good Job! I loved it congrates

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Siva

@siva2901

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Os so cute i had tears in my eyes 😭

Arnav is sad 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

very nice and sad one but pls do countinue.

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Nada

@Nada-rose

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

It's beautiful but sad too .

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Very sad bt very gud Os..ur amazing writer.

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Thank u all!!!!
Im so glad u all liked my work!!

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Danina

@Danina

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Amaaazzziiinnggg:D:D:D

Loooveed it:D

thanks ffor the scrap:D

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Tinu

@007jindal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

That was wow
so sorry 4 late comments
mujhe time hi nai mila .
Bt seriously i luved it

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Woah Chitu! Intense yaar! Intense! Wah! You've managed to express real feeling in there with your words! 👏 The pain, the hurt, he was absolutely breathless. I like how you've portrayed him not being able to fathom what she's said! Amazing work, what a parting. It's as if both feel a sense of loss, they both realise something is not right, but neither really understand it yet. I'm so glad you're writing! Keep it up as always! 😉👍🏼

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priya

@pooh_91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

wow tat was really good

the emoting in the end was briliant

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