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Fatima

@.infinite.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

this is an amazing SS Asma...loved reading it...!!😳

and the best thing about it is that it's on the current track...⭐️

please continue soon and add me to ur PM list...i have sent u a buddy request =)

Edited by -Fatz- - 13 years ago

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Nitika Sharon Krishna

@shaz01

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

it was brilliant!!!! plz PM me when u update!

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

asma 🤗

u made me all senti with this one sniff sniff. i feel awful for my arnie boy. he's struggling to cope up with da pain he has caused to his heart & khushi's. i wanna see him happy... ayooo me sad...

do update soon doll!!

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

OMFG! CONTINUE! PLEASE! PLEASE!!!!!!!!

on a more serious note, i love how you write, esp the part about arnav and the glass that he crushed, both the reader and arnav get this slight hint that the crushing is literal as well as metaphorical and it takes both, him more than us, a second to realize that it is actually him crushing the glass. <make any sense? 😕

o well, im just saying, u have talent.

Edited by malluangel - 13 years ago

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Sakshi Kaul

@sushi-la

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

this is so beautiful! please add me to your PM list!

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

A Fab SS,update soon,please add me to your PM list,Thanks😃

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: malluangel
OMFG! CONTINUE! PLEASE! PLEASE!!!!!!!!

on a more serious note, i love how you write, esp the part about arnav and the glass that he crushed, both the reader and arnav get this slight hint that the crushing is literal as well as metaphorical and it takes both, him more than us, a second to realize that it is actually him crushing the glass. <make any sense? 😕

o well, im just saying, u have talent.

Hi😳 Im not sure if i'll continue from here but will definitly write more when i can!

What u said does make sense and it means that it came across how i wanted it to so thanks for mentioning it😊

Thanks for reading and enjoying my writing, means a lot to read comments like urs😊

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deepa

@deeps_92

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

asma di...

once again sorry for commenting late...

do i have to say that it was great...no need...

look at your comments di...

iam feeling so happy for you...

cont your work...

and forgot to pm me...

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: deeps_92
asma di...
once again sorry for commenting late...

do i have to say that it was great...no need...

look at your comments di...

iam feeling so happy for you...

cont your work...

and forgot to pm me...

Aww thanks hun😳 I'm glad u thought it was good and don't say sorry, it's never late, always appreciate the comments!

I will PM u when/if I write more x