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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ArshForEver
wow. it was amaizing. plz dont let it finish there. continue soon and dont forget to pm me.

Aww that's so sweet but it was meant to be a one off scene...don't kno if I'll continue from here but will think about it! Thanks for reading x

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

very nice..please continue and pm me when u update

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

this was just beautiful!!

love the way you have written it!! i could totally feel wht arnav was feeling and had tears in my eyes by the time i was done reading!!!

awesome awesome awesome job!!

thank you soo much for the pm!!

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Riya Dutta

@RiyaDutta

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Gosh it was so beautiful...superb and stupendous job!!!👏

Thanks a lot for the PM!!🤗

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Sexy Sobti

@--BSI-FaNaTic--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

very nice do PM me when u update 👏

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: littlemoi
this was just beautiful!!
love the way you have written it!! i could totally feel wht arnav was feeling and had tears in my eyes by the time i was done reading!!!

awesome awesome awesome job!!

thank you soo much for the pm!!

Thank u and i cant believe it brought tears to ur eyes aww!!🤗

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aamina

@-aamina-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

first of all i'm sooo sorry hun for late comment. Finally read your os and as usuall it was mindblowing. just love the way you described his feelings.

thanks for the pm