OS: 'Shattered'

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Hi everyone, so after the very sweet response i got for my last OS, i decided to write something else. I kinda couldnt help myself again. This is a couple of days after friday's epi after he drops her off home and i don't know how good it is but it's from ASR's POV so its not smiles and roses. It's kinda long so bear with it!

Thanks for reading and do comment cos it helps keep me going. Also please add me as a buddy if u want PM's for any future work!

Asma😳

*NOTE: Link to an Index of my other work:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2240859/asmas-asr-madness-an-index

This OS has now been moved to my blog - please PM me for details!

Asma x

Edited by anjaani07 - 12 years ago

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@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

beautiful , do pm me

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Really nice. Wish it happens in the show. 😊 Please PM me when you update

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Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

this is beautiful. well written ! emotional were so realistic. can soo imagine this. please arnav stop her and tell her you love her *sighh* please pm me if you continue! :)

xxx

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

liked it so much pls add me 2 ur pm list pls pm me when u update next part

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

That was BRILLIANT!! Loved it!! Pls add me in your PM list :D

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Oh Asma I am blown away. I can feel each and every word. And really he is shattered and totally destroyed in Khushi's Love. I hope he realizes that soon enough. 👍🏼

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita99
Oh Asma I am blown away. I can feel each and every word. And really he is shattered and totally destroyed in Khushi's Love. I hope he realizes that soon enough. 👍🏼

Thank u!! I was waiting for ur comment, now i can cook in peace...well kinda, will probably get distracted😉

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lojain

@LifeOfTheParty

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Asma...superrr... love it ... u describe his love perfectly... and his wondering... i really love the scene ... waiting for the next u r rocking Jaan ... 👏... am busy so my comment is few but will be back and comment about my review