Ashlok OS-The Deadly Shadow(Part1-pg3)17/12/2014 - Page 5

Oh My My... 😃 Start scene was like um watching movie in big screen ...at some point i literally got scared and amazed it was like um watching an romantic horror movie with my duo EYES ... you are amazing meerab .. its really easy to visualize how you write and describe👏

Ahaann Shlok is Aasthaz Boyfriend...😳 and the witch is behind Shlok Ji😆 "YOUR LOVE IS MINE ONLY"
for an instant i thought there is MALE figure who want Aasthaz love and will threat her by torturing Shlok ... after reading "YOUR LOVE IS MINE ONLY"

LOved Aashloks Coochi Coo... and Then☺️☺️ OMG Bold Aasthu Baby❤️

She is such daramebaz ... stuck in traffic ...will be there in 1 or 2 hour 😆😆 liar liar .. but all showbiz people have this habit... loved Aastha Madam alot🤗

Loved the update ... 😛
Thanks 4 PM😊

Originally posted by: .Biggi.

It's interesting, Meerab!

but i'm so scared

😆😆 Biggi loved your emogi😃

Awesome update

finally ashlok in a horror subject.u r the most passionate ashlok writer who has tpuched all kinds of themes 4 ashlok.a very interesting theme.R ashlok lovers who r in live in relation or a married couple?Who is that scary girl?How is she relted 2 Ashlok?attractive banner.

Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi

😆😆 Biggi loved your emogi😃

Fabulous Update

So Astha's bangles came to where she and Shlok was right
but seems like some ghosty figure is actually wearing them
Shlok and Astha's love making in the morning held a little mischeivous
spank to it

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Meeeruuu

Nice start! It is surely something new

So aastha and shlok are together but not married and she works for suresh ? And some sahib? Hmm interesting

But I am a bit confused with the female cadaver that you mentioned xD

Anyway loved the first chap continue soon and do pm me as always

P.s. still waiting for your unres in my chapters ;) you promised, right?😆

She is an actress...and suresh works for him while sahib is the person for whose project astha is shooting...
Dont worry ghosts always confuse audiences with their initial appearance😆😆😆😆😆...later on they narrate their sad story😉😉😉😉😉...their age old habit😃😃😃😃
But thanks for commenting sweety...

And if I promised you something then surely I will fulfil it dear...sooner or later...actually I am reading your updates...slowly slowly...sorry for that but bit lazy these days when it comes to reading and writing...but once I ended up with all chapters...the comment will be there in your thread...😳😳😳😳😎...

Originally posted by: aymen22

no I m not asking this
I mean shlok is her bf or hubby?
and who is the ghost lady? is she shlok previous gf or mistress?

shlok is her bf not hubby...a relationship common between actors...
and who is the ghost lady ...if I told you this now then nothing will be left for the story so you will have to wait...😳

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

now tell me Meerab..before exams u were ok..

over study ..something has gotten into u...

fully remade.. remoulded..

You are talking abt skeletons and dead souls..

Really creepy..

First of all congo on this first chap Meerab .. loved the way u portrayed the dark charcter in mirror.

So Astha an actress...new role..loving it.. Shlok lover boy.. romantic and hot ..

The creepy characters past ...is it the house or X of shlok ..

if X shlok..is it romedy .." gHOSTS OF THE PAST .. GAL FRIENDS OF HIS "..

LOVED her attitude as heroine..late cming etc..

nice.. 👏

@bold yes... I think side effects of overstudy🤣
Thats why I want to write something different😉😉😉😉
Thanks for liking it dear...and she is shlok's ex or the house's ex😆😆😆😆...it will unfold with story dear...but she is no one's friend for sure...😈
Yeah heroine is a liar...but its common thing for actors...have heard so much about it in real life 😊
Thanks for the lovely comment dear😃