Ashlok OS-The Deadly Shadow(Part1-pg3)17/12/2014

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Mariia

@Mariia.R

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Great start! ⭐️

I like how you can write different types of stories and this one is again interesting and hooking too.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Do pm me when you update your stories 😊

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@ponderer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

You scared me 😕 there meeru.. Is this an OS or a short story? Waiting for the next...just don't scare us to death😆

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Part 1:

awesome start meerab...

Astha in a new avator as an actress...and shlok has is hot boyfriend...

so the third person in the house...who is that...

is the girl who want to take revenge of astha...

did shlok dumped any girl before...

or is she the girl who lost life because of astha's carelessness...

i know i will get to know all the answer in the future chapter...

but what to do more curious to know it...

take ur own time...and give us a scary and beautiful update...

Thanks for the wonderful treat...

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Lepzy

@Leprechaun

Moderator

+ 23

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Part 1 is nice.

Thanks for the PM.

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seema12345

@seema12345

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Pls put shloks pic in the montage to

Thanks

Another great story 👏

Edited by seema12345 - 10 years ago

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

as promise am here to comment

wow

beautiful

magnicificently typed down *claps*

love it

thanks for pm

sorry for late replying

p.s. Sorry 4 short comment many pms are pending to read and comment

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sruthykarthika

@sruthykarthika

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Amazing story. Interesting concept. Like it sooo much. Update soon meera. Waitingg.

Edited by sruthykarthika - 10 years ago

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mehare

@mehare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

loved this horror story meerab 😉😉😉 & excellently written this part 👏👏👏 such a hot & scary update & happy😛 that for this story many more chapter we wait to read thanks for writing this story more than one part to read waiting for next update liked this horror story so much😳😳😳😳

waiting for next pls update soonwaitingwaitingwaiting