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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

oh shlok... What has he done...

Edited by .logs - 11 years ago

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jj23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

i hope ash u r not planning to leave us here...hope v get more updates today...v r worried nw

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poojya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Hii Ashley this is my first post in the forum... I have been in forum since 1year but I have never posted anything.i don't even no how to post. I am a silent reader I wait for ur updates everyday, today I am affected in such a way after reading the update I am not able to think anything,now it is 4am in Australia for us I have been waiting for ur update since 3hrs although I have my final exam in masters tomm morning,I am really effected by this update pls give us a happy update sooon

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Girls,I will be updating tomorrow, although I want to write but my brain is not cooperating, I cried buckets writing shlok's part, he is so sad, that I am feeling sad.

Next Anjali is going to try to help them.

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Micky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

shlok is idiot

cant he realize what aastha had written was only the outcome of his behavior

Aastha must be shattered now

hope Ayi helps them

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

Girls,I will be updating tomorrow, although I want to write but my brain is not cooperating, I cried buckets writing shlok's part, he is so sad, that I am feeling sad.

Next Anjali is going to try to help them.

awww for us...bt u take ur time(ofcourse only till 2mrrw). Atleast try to update in afternoon

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sajusuji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#567

No Ashley you can't do this to us

How can shlok take such a big decision, divorce

Don't make Astha sad again,she had already gone through enough torture

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Honey_berries

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Right when I was thinking of a full blown patch up. . Boom you dropped this bomb on us. Not that I am complaining. . Lol. I like the way you have turned the tables. I have fasten my seat belt. Let the roller coaster begin.

Btw, you have depicted the emotions so beautifully. This is exactly how it happens in real life when you only think from your own perspective but never put the perspective of others in the same frame to really put two and two together. What a fantastic writer you are and with each passing update I keep thinking more and more about how amazing it'd be for you to really become a writer for a show with Shrenu and Avinash playing these exact same character :) good luck and waiting for the next update :)

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

Girls,I will be updating tomorrow, although I want to write but my brain is not cooperating, I cried buckets writing shlok's part, he is so sad, that I am feeling sad.

Next Anjali is going to try to help them.

Oh thank god Ashley...am not the only one who was crying reading shloks part...was wondering...am the one who cried buckets while reading shlok torturing astha like hell with his indifference...wants him to suffer!!

But am not able to bear...he's letting his tiny go away from him...he's so much in love...

I have seen my husband being preoccupied or indulging him in work...but I never took it as indifference...

Here I think astha's age is playing a crucial role...

Shlok is too matured and as he rightly said he wants a wife who's matured enough to handle things...

Poor asthu is living in her bubble world n taken all his words personal...(what we gt to read from her diaries are all her pov)

Haven't read anything like this...it's just awesome!!