Ashlok SS-Game Of Destiny(Chapter5-Pg40)...14/12/2014

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Jhuma

@jhumjhum

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Lovely update Meerab Shlok try his best to insult Astha cause he don't want to get weak for this caring n love from Astha. Astha understand her feeling for Shlok n now Shlok also start dreaming about her hai Pyaar ka Nesha Charaha Hai 😉 Mr.Akdu paar 😆! Finally he talk to her normally waiting for next part n thanks for PM dear 😃.

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Lovely chap dearest meeru!

So shlok doesn't want to be vulnerable and doesn't want to feel love again

He is confused by aasthas intentions and why she is doing so

Felt so sorry when he insulted her time and time again

But liked that he dreamt about her

Pls continue soon

:D want to knoe what will shlok do next ;)

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

wonderfull n amazing...

thx fr the pm...

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

awesome update \ thanks for pm 😳

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Anmary sebastian

@ANNMARY25

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

simple and interesting
very nice👏👏👏

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

astha cant avoid her feelings...

and shlok notice...

he is changing to

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

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Devu

@DEVU.NAIR

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

read all the pending chap😃

it's one of my fav story of ur's,i just loved it very much❤️

so our asthu is in love and our hero is avoiding her presence

seems like to some extent he know abt her feelings😊and now he started to see dreams abt her too😉loved the last convo between ashlok😊

this story gonna interesting😉egerly waiting...update soon...

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guesss what ???????...i am basically so cool......

@ashlok

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Wooowww

U deserves a tight hug myyy dearrr

Superbbb work yaaar

I know I am late but I u need to for give meee

I think SHLOK has already loved someone

And he has a ssoft corner for his sisterrr

And what a dream man

Aasthu giving feathery kissies tooo SHLOK

And I love the way aasthu scolding SHLOK
Akdu...Mr rude... Khadoos are really perfecttt

And the way SHLOK realizes her moves

And I love this s parttt also