||AsHlok SS~The Voice~ Chapter6 Pg62 Up*8Oct14||

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nice Start...U have wrote it so well...

Feeling sorry for Astha...She married someone else...

Waiting to see hw the story unfold in future...

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Aamna

@Aamna Am

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Very Well Written👏

Well I myself cant write such a wonderful SS.😭😆

only master in siggy making lol😆

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...
Omggg suri! This is amazing. The concept is soo intriguing and gripping. Like I want you to update all the chapters right nowitself. I just loved how you wrote from Astha's POV, it had that bit of humour and seriousness all in one.

You are a fab writer suri👏👏 words are not enough to explain my thoughts😳 the way you brought around the characters, all just amazing. Love your writing technique, what is the secret😉😆

Hmm soo many questions and I mean soo many questions are flying about. What is their love story, did they even have one😊
Update sooon suriya xoxox🤗

lol Ayesha was i t that intriguing? waise i have most of the chapters in my hand😆

Well there is no secret i just try to imitate what i read😃

Yes this one unlike the last one is a little less into mystery. the story will flow smoothly and i am sure is quite predictable😆

Will update once i reply to you all!😳

and thank GOD you unressed unlike the other two bonkers...zehra and Tara!😆

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
Although I am not familiar with this couple yet I liked the concept of the story...😊

awh! that's really nice of you😃

i hope i'll see you around!😳

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
nice start
ok so she is married
bt y did shlok did nt stop her if he loved her
do update soon

Thank you so much!

You'll get it once you read further!😃

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: priya_avi
Aww...its really awesome n trust me u got me hooked with the tittle of this fiction itself..
I just loved n enjoyed reading each n every word of this story...n am not flattering u...its something there in uurway of writing which is so unique,refreshing and at the same time intriguing...keep up the good work man...!!

Voice...what made shlok not to voice his feelings towards astha is a million dollar question for me...
And swati..uff..am sure she made shlok life living hell even astha's...and am damn sure she must be aware of the fact that ashlok have some interest towards each other...
I maybe totally wrong...but am sorry yaar...I cant think straight about her...hmm its my personal dislike towards her name...leave it...

On the whole its very nice n another promising one from u lazylad👏

Really is the title any gripping? I was a little doubtful!😳

I am very glad you liked it!😃

Well both did not voice their feelings to eachother because both knew but still its very important to do so when you are best friends with someone!😃

It's okay Swati ain't really a protagonist you can feel the way you like!😳

And LazyLad? are you a stalker too? How long have you known me?😆

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: khisher
OHHH woowww it z STUPENDOUS <3
Back in love with ashlok <3
u r amazing suriii and this chap has stolen my heart...update soon

Thank You so much Anaya!

Back in love with you again😆