||AsHlok SS~The Voice~ Chapter6 Pg62 Up*8Oct14||

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

nice start

ok so she is married

bt y did shlok did nt stop her if he loved her

do update soon

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Aww...its really awesome n trust me u got me hooked with the tittle of this fiction itself..

I just loved n enjoyed reading each n every word of this story...n am not flattering u...its something there in uurway of writing which is so unique,refreshing and at the same time intriguing...keep up the good work man...!!

Voice...what made shlok not to voice his feelings towards astha is a million dollar question for me...

And swati..uff..am sure she made shlok life living hell even astha's...and am damn sure she must be aware of the fact that ashlok have some interest towards each other...

I maybe totally wrong...but am sorry yaar...I cant think straight about her...hmm its my personal dislike towards her name...leave it...

On the whole its very nice n another promising one from u lazylad👏

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Anaya Ali

@khisher

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

OHHH woowww it z STUPENDOUS <3
Back in love with ashlok <3
u r amazing suriii and this chap has stolen my heart...update soon

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome update

Loved it

Astha is married

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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Samia

@Sam_15

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow what a surprise! You are starting a new fiction already? When I came on IF and saw ur pm, my first thought was, is this the fiction she was talking about? The one which relates to JKP?

The story itself sounds really intriguing but then again which one of ur stories don't?

So Astha and Shlok have been childhood friends...how sweet. I just love these kind of stories where the couple-in-love have been friends since their childhood days. There's just something about the concept of two best friends eventually falling in love with each other that just sounds so touching to me.

And surprise surprise Swati yahan bhi tapak padi.. 😆😆 Bechare Ashlok ka in stories main bhi peecha nahin chodti yeh Swati 😆😆

But it's a pity really that both Ashlok loved each other but because of some misunderstanding or perhaps lack of communication they ended up with different people. Now poor Astha is bound in a loveless marriage. And what's the mystery behind Sameer? Is he having an affair?

Loved ur first few lines about finding one's own voice. That was very deep. Forces one to reflect on your words.

Continue soon! And let me know if it's the same story or a different one.

Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago

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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

that was wonderful suri...u write beautifully

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awsum Hun! Very Intriguing And Intresting!! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!!

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Aman3010

@Aman3010

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Very promising...can't believe ashlok are not together. Continue soon

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Very interesting! I wonder if swatis and shloks relationship is the reason aastha really married sameer ? Pls do update soon want to know what happend between Aastha and Shlok and what will happen does he really love her?