ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 78

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

Nice update... I understand u'll hav to make twists, bt u write happy endings only write??? I'm nt exactly into tragic stories nw...

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Extraordinary update !

So sweet how shlok is happy and trying to convince everyone that his desicion is the right one

Poor Aastha what happend to her that she had to hurt him? Is she being blackmailed by someone? Maybe his family?

Pls do update soon and thank you so much for your pm

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hi, madhu, thank you so much. This makes the effort of sitting and trying to write a update whilst keeping my kids from killing themselves. I'm so glad you liked the story and finally felt compelled to comment. Gave me such a pleasure to read your comment. I'm touched. Hope you'd continue to drop a comment. I'd love to read them. Next update tomorrow. Keep reading.

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

S, surely I ll comment anu, actually I was tightly scheduled these days, so couldn't comment

But I eagerly wait for ur updates😊,pakkawala promise I ll find time to comment😛

Originally posted by: bm11

Anu, thank you for the pm and for the very well written update.

What do I feel? or better say smell... I smell betrayal.

The smell is very strong and for Shlok I believe it would be unforgettable.

In the last chapter I hoped the family would join hands but I was wrong.

They prefer to "look" good or I'm wrong? To the hell with son's feelings. He'll survive, he'll manage.

The crux of the matter - no bad mouthing, right?

As if the people they are so afraid of would ever help them in the crucial moment

I feel the Daddy did all smoothly without coarse stitches.

Surely Astha would try to shoo her love off. I wonder what the arguments will be...

I love the descritpion of the desperate man. Oh, I'm a sadist I know. Give me more, please.

I ask because I know you always fulfill my wishes😉😆

Just joking😉

Thank you for the reality without monsters and ghosts👏

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hey! Jane..thank you for the appreciation as always, you know what it means for a writer. You're very generous. Betrayal of the highest order. Its not gonna be pretty. Damn he'd wish she left him for another would've been better and far less hurtful. But this is gonna be hard to digest. Even for a sadists like you and me.

But you might agree with her reasoning. It's big might...

Your wish is my command. Thou shall be done,...

Thanks dear friend for the wonderful words and interest. Give more strength and urge to keep writing.