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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Awww, such an awesome update, jus loved it to the core

Kids were not ready to leave shlok but astha reminded them of their talk, poor kids

Explained every emotion perfectly,

Shlok is an ange,l he can never become a beast😕

Astha said she is leaving him for kids, does NA asked her to leave kids if she wants to marry him donno

Loved each and every line of the update

Great job dear, waiting for next part

Thank u so much for PM Anu😊

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Sandy198

@Sandy198

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

nooo... the agnihotris have done this :'( :'( :'(

make everything well sooon ... i doubt if aastha will be pregnant with his child.. no leap pls ;-) update soon !

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Chapter 29:

Emotionally and Touching update Anu...

Poor Shlok...I can feel the pain he has...

Poor Astha...Surely she is hiding something from Shlok...

May be after hearing the truth he might break into pieces...Thats why astha is trying to cook up some reason making herself too strong...

I felt NA or Anjali hand should be behind it...

Amazing writing Anu...Love the way u described Astha view as soon as she saw him near the door...

Swollen and red eyes,mess hairy,grown up beard just amazing...

Even though shlok is very much worried why Astha is avoiding him...he was so caring and patience to handle her...

Shlok is so much anger with Astha when she gave a fake up reason...

and upset with her for doubting him...

I dont want shlok to lose hope and think properly and figure out what went wrong...

Poor Astha crying her heart out after shlok left...Feeling pity for her...

Why is always crying and sorrow in her life...

Why is god so cruel to her...he gave her happiness and with in a short period he took it back from her...

Will Astha be able to leave without shlok now...what is she going to answer the girls for their non stop questions...

Amazing creation Anu...

Waiting for your next update...

Thanks for the PM...

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Kamal kulshreshta

@srilotus

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Awesome,superb ,yet emotional update...👏👏

Poor Shlok...my heart is crying...

wat made Astha change her decision?/?

She completely trust Shlok...something else is killing her...she knows Shlok loves her kids..but y she ditched him...

feeling bad for Shlok as well as for Astha...

or is it NA behind all this?

Anu,ur potrayal of Shlok is jus brilliant...he is loving ,caring and a family man...loving his characterization.

Ur story is close to reality...as we all read in news paper, such unbelievable incidents happening in our society.

Thanks a lot for PM.😃

Edited by srilotus - 11 years ago

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: bm11
Ahhh, Anu, I loved it a lot😊
Will you forgive me if i say I loved it most until this moment?
Yes, I confess. I'm desperate for sufferings😳
Now step by step what I liked: details, as usual. they show the skill of the author to me.
They are in abundunce in the chapter. His look, her movements, her reaction...
Secondly, the logics that they exchange while talking.
Her arguments are absolutely transparent.
She made him think her head is full of cockroachres. It's so easy to believe when we see something like that when we meet it. We actually all shallow enough to accept obvious facts without additional questioning. This man did it.
Looking at the ocean he came to the conclusion how deep the ocean is...
Sorry for both of them. Two victims...
So you made them part. It looks like forever. He returns home, she continues her surgeries...
God, I hope no one would ever come under the scalpel of the doctor in such a state😭

P.S. Hore your dentist was not like that?😆

Thanks jane. Gald you liked the update. Hope it lived up to your expectations of a betrayal. She's desperately trying to convince her and him her reasons. But my boy Shlok Is a keen observer. He's,no fool. He did take one look and decided fhe depth. But he just might be tempted to take dip as well. After all he's the great Shlok Agnihitri but most of all he's truly deeply madly in love with her, even now. So for now he may have taken her words at face value. But he's thinking. Good thing is he's got no ego when it comes to her. So he'll be willing to try.

Hope she'll give him a chance to explore the reasons. Second guess her words and actions. Part they must but it's not for long.

Thanks jane once again for the wonderful words. You give me the push to go on...along with deeps and the others. Means much to me..

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
I'm in tears now... I was able to feel Shlok's pain... Aastha shud've come up with something else... Shlok's anger is totally justified...
Nice update...

Fret not. It's all for a short period. I felt he was lame in his anger. His love for her is not allowing him to even now with everything happening refuses to totally rip her apart and devour her. True love can so that to you.

That was the one reason she was assured of him walking out. It was best the bet. Only she had the control over that decision. Maximums impact. She went for,the kill. And made her killing. Thanks Natasha for the encouragement. Means much to me.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chapter 28:

Lovely update Anu...

Shlok was waiting for the right time to talk to the family...so responsible guy...

After conveying his wish to them, he was so relaxed and on cloud nine...and started planning everything...

Even the kids,Astha was also equally happy...They enjoyed each and every steps shlok took for them...

Nirajan thought abt Astha was too bad...How can he think so bad about her...

he is so selfish to think about the society,his friends,community rather than his own son's happiness...

I wonder why the society and the poeple are so biased about gender...When a men adopt a kid then he is considered as mahan and a good heart person to think abt others...they are so selfless person and so on...

But when a good hearted female does the same thing...Why immediately they start doubting about her character...so many unneccessary talk...

I have a strong feeling that NA is behind Astha's ignoriyal behaviour...

Poor Shlok was worried too much , what would have happened to their loved one...

He truly loved them a lot thats why he rushed back to them ASAP to check...Really he is true hero...

Hope astha wont break her and Shlok heart...

Wonderful update dear...

Thanks for the PM...

Thanks Sathu, for that very detailed comment. I'm touched. He's the ideal son, brother. He'd be the ideal husband and father if only she'd give him a chance.

Niranjan is not different from the majority. He's not immune to the way society thinks and functions. It's sad but not a novelty.

Why she did what she did will be revealed in the last update. Not very far. Do keep reading and enjoy my dear friend.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: rbb1
OMG poor poor Astha and Shlok, I feel sorry for them both, I hope we find out the reason why she did that soon

Very soon her reasons will be revealed. I next one will be the penultimate chapter. It'll be revealed in the last, thank you for your interest,

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: .Natasha.

Then we travel in d same boat😆 I'm quite a sadist myself!

Come along then...more the merrier!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Awww, such an awesome update, jus loved it to the core
Kids were not ready to leave shlok but astha reminded them of their talk, poor kids
Explained every emotion perfectly,
Shlok is an ange,l he can never become a beast😕
Astha said she is leaving him for kids, does NA asked her to leave kids if she wants to marry him donno
Loved each and every line of the update
Great job dear, waiting for next part
Thank u so much for PM Anu😊

Thank you Madhu! Glad you enjoyed the update, angel he is. But when push comes to shove you tend to react. Shlok was just reacting to the situation.

Her reasons will be revealed soon. She used the kids cause that carried the biggest blow. It was a sure shot blow. But he's no fool he'll be thinking...so it's all going to end well. For them at lest. Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment.

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