ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 34

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 12...lovely update dear...

Poor Astha... Really feeling sorry for her...hope she come out of it soon...

Both felt there love for each other...only time will bring them together...

Hoping some miracle happen soon...

Her fears have trapped her love and life. She needs to break free... Shlok will try to help her she just needs to be convinced that it.
Thank you.
Yes. I will PM you the next time.

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

The more I read your comments the more I'm convinced of your writing capabilities. The way you write is so poetic. Pls give it some serious thought.
Yes he's the first one she's ever fallen for.
I couldn't have put it better myself. All of what astha is feeling.
Thank you lil one for the wonderful words.
He'll keep on making those cracks bigger. Hope she won't try and close them back...

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Her fears have trapped her love and life. She needs to break free... Shlok will try to help her she just needs to be convinced that it.
Thank you.
Yes. I will PM you the next time.

Wow great update Anu thank you aww Asthas daughers are so sweet, it's nice to know that Shlok will be father to Asthas daughters that's nice of him but wonder if his family will agree to that

awesome update...
loved it...
plz continue soon...

awesome so what will he do now

Tremendous update dear.

Originally posted by: sreekailas

hayeee!!im dead reading ur response!!☺️

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Thank you dear for your response...

Originally posted by: rbb1

Wow great update Anu thank you aww Asthas daughers are so sweet, it's nice to know that Shlok will be father to Asthas daughters that's nice of him but wonder if his family will agree to that