ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...the kids part was sooo cute😳😳😳😳...
So finally our shlokie came to know that her angel is not married but having twin girls...and i loved him the way he still wanted her ...and is ready to accept her kids tooo...that was so sweet😛😛😛😛...
It was simply brilliant update👏👏👏👏👏...
And these lines were super awesome⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...

He wanted to spend every waking moment with her. There was so much he wanted to tell, so many things he wanted do with her. He wanted to experience life with her. He wanted to grow old with her. He wanted to have a family with her, kids.

Then he remembered her kids, is he ready for them. What about his family. His parents? What Will they say? Am I ready to be the father to someone else's kids. Will they love him? What about the biological father?


Loved his question to himself that... will her kids accept him as their father...will they love him???...


After jeeni's ff...its the second time I am falling for shlok in a story...
Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. .is he really ready for fatherhood also wow the way he thinks is superb. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
"You're not the first patient to fall for Dr.Astha" but the nurse dont know that he is the first person Dr.Aastha has fallen for!! Both Aastha n Shlok realize this truth..but aastha is too damn adamant..!! poor girl..all these years, she locked herself in a dark room forbidden for others..she hid herself behind the tall wall of dat room..but shlokie, the sun managed to create cracks on that wall with his immense, scorching love!!Now literally reshmi n roshani are entering her sanctuary..now waiting for d day when she will get soaked completely in his brightness!!
amazing update once again..the way u xplained shlok's happiness on finding out that aastha also feels for him.....amazing👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 11 amazing update...
Poor shlok eagerly waiting for some reply from her...and heart broken when heard abt the kids...

Poor astha fighting with her feeling...

Sorry for the late reply...

If possible can u PM tear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 12...lovely update dear...
Poor Astha... Really feeling sorry for her...hope she come out of it soon...

Both felt there love for each other...only time will bring them together...

Hoping some miracle happen soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you very much for your continued support!
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you Bobbie!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: miac

Nice update. .is he really ready for fatherhood also wow the way he thinks is superb. .



Thank you Raji! He's ready to be anything for her. All that matters to him is her love.
He's a man on a mission...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sreekailas

"You're not the first patient to fall for Dr.Astha"but the nurse dont know that he is the first person Dr.Aastha has fallen for!! Both Aastha n Shlok realize this truth..but aastha is too damn adamant..!! poor girl..all these years, she locked herself in a dark room forbidden for others..she hid herself behind the tall wall of dat room..but shlokie, the sun managed to create cracks on that wall with his immense, scorching love!!Now literally reshmi n roshani are entering her sanctuary..now waiting for d day when she will get soaked completely in his brightness!!

amazing update once again..the way u xplained shlok's happiness on finding out that aastha also feels for him.....amazing👏



The more I read your comments the more I'm convinced of your writing capabilities. The way you write is so poetic. Pls give it some serious thought.
Yes he's the first one she's ever fallen for.
I couldn't have put it better myself. All of what astha is feeling.
Thank you lil one for the wonderful words.
He'll keep on making those cracks bigger. Hope she won't try and close them back...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 11 amazing update...

Poor shlok eagerly waiting for some reply from her...and heart broken when heard abt the kids...

Poor astha fighting with her feeling...

Sorry for the late reply...

If possible can u PM tear...



Thank you! Please, Don't say sorry! Read and comment when ever you get the time.
But he's ready to act on his impulses as well. He' won't just sit and wait for things to happen. He'll try and make things happen,

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