ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter

miac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Anu just read it nw no need to tell its awsome becoz we already knew it rit...

4 Whom am I feeling sorry???little more 4 shlok now..last updated I wished message should not be reached him will be better but after reading this one he is rit a simple rejection is way too better than silence. ..yes we knew it very well rit how stupid am I to think otherwise. ..now he knew half truth ans she is avoiding him..hhmm nw I demand next chapter as soon as possible...plsplspls..

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Just read the last two chapters...really beautiful and emotional Anu...keep them coming!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: lachii
Oh poor guy ... n girl too of course, waiting for this wait to end

She'll keep waiting till his head blows up with steam...

Thank Sonia ...for taking the time.

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: Sg2013
Very nice Anu. Waiting for Shlok to land up in front of Astha's house.

He's still not allowed to step out of the hospital...but u r giving me ideas...

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: miac
Anu just read it nw no need to tell its awsome becoz we already knew it rit...
4 Whom am I feeling sorry???little more 4 shlok now..last updated I wished message should not be reached him will be better but after reading this one he is rit a simple rejection is way too better than silence. ..yes we knew it very well rit how stupid am I to think otherwise. ..now he knew half truth ans she is avoiding him..hhmm nw I demand next chapter as soon as possible...plsplspls..

Thanks Raji. Yes! Not knowing is the worst part. Going thru all the ifs and buts...

I feel for both of them. But their misery will continue...

Thanks Raji. Sorry love no update today. That's why I gave two yesterday. If I get a chance I'll deff try. May be in the night. Will keep u posted.

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: lively_roshani
heart break

Getting bit of your own medicine... In your FFs u give us one after the other...

So now u know how we feel.

It'll get worst before it gets better...

Thank you rosh...

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Serviana
Just read the last two chapters...really beautiful and emotional Anu...keep them coming!

Thanks yasna...really glad your liking the story so far.

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: rbb1
waiting for the update

Sorry ray...may be tonight...not promising anything...

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r

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Posted: 11 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Sorry ray...may be tonight...not promising anything...

ok take your time

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sreekailas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Anju! You should start writing something. I really like your word. I'm not kidding. So you want more heat. I can get some jalapeo peppers.
Yes! Explained her situ so well. Shlok more than the readers groping in the darkness. He can't help unless she wants to be.

aahan..at first i asked u to write sometng, n now u r asking d same to ME?!😆

Poor aastha, she sees things in black n white, no in between..she need to realize that life has numerous other colors in store!

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