ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter

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athmi

@athmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awestruck by your writing skill. 👏
happy to see you in writer avatar. 😃
awesome start 👍🏼.
when you start sending pms do send me too.😳

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crazygul

@crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Anukulu di love u di from india... its amazing.. ur poems are too touching. love u di..

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: .Farah.
YAAAY YAAAY YAAAY!
I'm super duper happy to see you write your first fiction! 🤗
And needless to say, this was AMAZING!
Loved every bit of it!👏

I wonder what does Shlok do, that he had enemies to shoot him 😆
And Astha is a cardiologist I guess, and the people on the bed seem to be her kids if I'm not wrong? 😳
And I loved the "I'm in heaven" part.. 😆

OMG, I can't wait to read further... Pls update soon! 😳
Add me to your pm list!

Ps- Thank you so much for the mention 😳
And about the PM's ... You can ask the interested people to send you a buddy request, and every time you update, just click on their names in your new message and send them the link!
If you still have doubts, I'll pm you the way to do so 😳

Thank you so much farah! You just gave me a booster. Your like red bull, I have never tried it, just going by the advert, it says right...red bull gives you wings. Well now I'm flying...

Next update you shall get the answers to some of your queries. Will post the next chapter soon.

Thanks farah once again. I

Not convinced with the pm. Will see.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Serviana
amazing start dear!!!
looking forward to more!!!!

update update!!!

Thanks yasna! Glad you liked it. Will post the next chapter soon.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: azraEBP
Anu... Wow.. What can I say.. I'm speechless. I'm so happy that you decided to pen Ashlok's story in a different angle. "He squeezed her hand and she had a strange feeling" that scene came to my mind.. You know which.. Thanks Anu.. Keep tagging me. Best of luck girl.. Love you.. 👏

Hey! Azra, this is a pleasant surprise! Glad you peeped it. Just like astha. Thank you for making an exception for me. Will keep on nagging you you with my tagging. Love you too.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: lively_roshani
OMG i love u dear
you accepted my suggestion
thanks
it is awesome
you are not only gud poet but mind blowing writer
love it
please continue soon

Yes! I did! You girls kept on requesting me, so I obliged. Glad you liked it, and I'm anything but mind blowing. Hope I won't give anybody headaches. Thank you for giving me the push a kick and thank you for the wonderful comments. Love you too.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: athmi
awestruck by your writing skill. 👏
happy to see you in writer avatar. 😃
awesome start 👍🏼.
when you start sending pms do send me too.😳

Thanks Athmi. Glad you liked the first instalment. Will send you a pm once I get the hang of it for sure.