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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

chap 2

Rosh and rash so cute😃 okay now I m clear somewhat Shloks memory was a recent one...i had thought it was the past😛 Shlok definitely isnt a grey character here...he callls her angel that is soo cute and cuteee to begin with!😳 Both feeling a connect...coincidence? But how they met didnt leave any hints that they had even seen each other before!😕

You have ecthed the characters really well...and I cant wait for ashlok to have affectionate conversations..though as doc-patient but you are sure good at making even those seem romantic to us hopeless people!😳

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Anu thanku for giving double update...lovely updates...
Nice to see for once Agnes in good books...happy that varad married his high school swear heart...loved the bonding between Agni's...n the mesmerizing eye lock between ashlok...what's with astha y this much regret...poor soul...hope u unfold something about her in next update..

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Chapter 3A

Astha must have thought shlok is still traumatic😆shlok thinking he is dead and in the heaven, but so relieved when he knows he didnt hallucinate😉i can understand how badly he must have hoped for her to be real😃

So NA and Anjali...anjali looks good..NA?😕how can the assasin just hit the wrong target😲 more than we can see!

Awsmmly drawn plot Anu👏 though said dont finish soon..i cant wait to read more😉

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Chapter 3B

Aww Anjali loves shlok the most..he too!😳 something i m desp to see in the show So Astha is in LA...Destiny Asthas mom died beacuase of her? heartbreaking for a daughter to live with that gulit though it may have been indirct!😕 I was laughing while reading that for the Agnis family mattered most! i wasnt expecting that...on the surface everything looks gold!😲 Am i simply feeling this is deeper than you have made us think or?🤓

so future anticipates for some really good Anjali-Astha interactions😳I love those two!😃

I wont say continue soon😆 but i think you know😉⭐️

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow!!! Anuuu... You started writing a story!! 🤗

Great!!!

Will read soon and comment 😃

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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

wow anu...u started a fiction and did not pm me...bad bad...i just saw it on twitter otherwise i would not have known...will read it after some time...and do not forget to pm me when you update plz...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sreekailas
Oh My God!! I never thought that u would write this fast..😃 Im proud dat I was never wrong abt ur talent..😊 U proved that u r not only a good poet but can write great stories too..👏👏 Thanks 4 considering our idea writing this..N comin 2 d prologue, does Aastha have children?! so where is shlok?! Is dat d mystery?! Anyway, i really love emotional stuffs even though i will end up heart broken after reading those..
In short.. Well begun is half done..so ur job is half done di..⭐️waiting 4 u 2 complete ur work..n no need to hurry

Yes! I did take the plunge. Glad you liked the story. Thank you so much for the confidence in my writing. You girls seems be more sure of my abilities than me, I thank you for that.

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Chap 3A And 3B amazing update...

Shlok feeling towards Astha was lovely...

Anjali and shlok bonding so sweet...

Astha fighting with herself was amazing...

Pls continue soon...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chap 3A And 3B amazing update...

Shlok feeling towards Astha was lovely...

Anjali and shlok bonding so sweet...

Astha fighting with herself was amazing...

Pls continue soon...

Thank you for the keen interest and Thank you for the previous comment as well. Glad you like the story.