Ashlok SS-Still In My Heart....(Last Part-pg82)

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi everyone...after my ss-true love ...i am back with another short story on ashlok... hope you will like it and love it the same way u like my other stories😊...

For this story I just wanna say

"First you will smile, and then you will cry"don't say you haven't been warned."

Please scroll down to read the prologue

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

Prologue

How dare you to play such a prank with me???the aged person shouted on him...

But the young man standing at the other end of the table was barely hearing even his single word...he was busy observing latest movie ad on the newspaper placed on table...his mind already started making plans for the evening with his friends...a faint smile played on his lips...

When the old man noticed that the young man is paying least attention to him...he picked up and throw that newspaper on his face...

Here I am shouting my lungs out ...and you are standing as if i am entertaining you...the old man said in extreme angry tone...

His smile vanished and few wavy lines appeared on his forehead...his frown was telling that he was not happy the way he was treated a moment before...

Now if you have finished devouring me with your eyes...would you like to tell me your punishment yourself or i should decide it????...the old man remarked sarcastically...

Ok now if you are having no words to say then i am going to give you a punishment ...you will really regret...

The young man smirked...

The old man smiled...don't worry... your this attitude is near end Mr.Shlok Agnihotri...as i am going to snatch away ur freedom which you love sooo much...

''You will stay in this institute daily till late night for after-college activities...and its mandatory for you to participate in all educational functions otherwise your father's high name will be useless to stop your expulsion next time...now you can leave my office''...

Shlok gave him a disgusting look and left the room kicking the door...

Shlok agnihotri... son of niranjan agnihotri... was popular for his short temperness and rebellious behavior in whole college...

He was a habitual culprit in ruining the normal peaceful environment of college...
Visit to principal's office every other day was in his routine now...and even today he got punishment for throwing muddy water on principal...as he was challenged by his friends to do so...

But the punishment was unaffordable for him as he hardly used to attend all his classes during college hours and now staying in college even after timings was too much for him...as for him his freedom was above all...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part1

Part2

Part3

Part4

Part5

Part 6

Part7

Part8

Part9

Last Part

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome prologue meerab...so shlok is bigda hua raees zada here 😆 Such a troublemaker...loving this concept 😃

Meerab I was shocked to know this SS is inspired by a walk to remember. Haye meeru why didn't u tell me that before? Woh to meri stalking skills kaam aa gayi and i got to know...warna to mujhe pata hi na chalta 😔 Agar mujhe pata hota to main bohot pehle yeh padh chuki hoti. That is one of my all time favourite movies. And this new information has already made me fall in love with this story even before i have starting reading it. Now i understand what u meant when u said that this story will make us laugh first and then cry 😭 if u r following the same theme as AWTR then this story will surely make me cry buckets

P.s. I've decided from now on i am going to read each one of ur comment in ur stories because apparently reading ur replies to people's comments can provide a lot of background information abt ur stories 😈

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Despite ur warning I'm reading this cuz I couldn't help it...

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

The prologue was very nice dear...

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

U r on a roll Meerab😃 update soon!

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

meera u came with another one 😉 u r amazing yaar! ashlok in ur baner looks adorable..arent they?? Its really dashing..hmm shlok agnihothri spoilt brat of rich daddy with attitude as high as his height...cant be more intresting 😃 but the warning iam ready to cry in the middle but not at ending😭... Tfd pm 😛