Ashlok SS-Still In My Heart....(Last Part-pg82) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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first tell me one thing
after crying, can we get a chance to smile or not??
please, dont give any sad endings sweety.. i cant tolerate that
lil busy..will read later n comment
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The prologue is nice.
Continue soon
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Great start meerab, loved it
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Great start meerab, loved it

Eagerly waiting thanks for pm

welcome sweety😳
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Awesome prologue and lovely banner.
I was waiting for someone to an os or ff on Shlok Agnihotri as spoiled brat.
I am going to read it despite your warning.
Waiting for the update.
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Shlokie as a college guy!
Eagerly waiting to read further...
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Great start
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prologue is lovely meerab and the banner too😳
i am ready to cry at the end too but cant afford to miss your story😉

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Wow...what a intresting prologue...
Please update soon...
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Part 1


Shlok was busy badmouthing the principal sitting with his friends...when one of his friend whispered ...look she came...

The other one said...as usual busy solving the problem with her mobile...Oh God cann't she even afford a new mobile...

The third one spoke...even dont know how long we have to see her in these old fashioned salwar suits i mean look at the other girls and her ...she is the only antique piece in our whole college...

The fourth guy joined them too...i think she needs a little makeover...as she has got a pretty face...

The first one teased him...then go and ask for her hand if you really like her sooo much...but his reply was...''hey i was just giving a suggestion otherwise i would like to die instead of marrying that weirdo"...

They all laughed loudly
including shlok making fun of her simplicity...



As she was passing by their side...akash one of shlok's friend stopped her saying...hi astha...new mobile...nice haan...but looks like you have problems with the new one tooo...he taunted her...

Thank you sooo much akash but i think you need a good doctor for your eyes...as its still the old one...astha's quick reply came as a slap to him...

Akash's friends tooo laughed at his insult...

Astha kirloskar...daughter of avdhoot kirloskar...was a middle-class simple,kind and bookish girl...
She was sooo different from other girls...

She use to sit on a separate corner table in cafetaria...always with some book in her hands whether related to their study course or not...

Though she was simple but still confident enough to handle all her matters with maturity...this was the reason that even today she didn't feel bad when akash again passed remarks on her mobile...as this was not new to her...everyday someone used to comment on her in one way or the other and she replied to them in their styles always with a smile on her face...

Shlok tooo knew her for many years as both were in same class but he has rarely ever spoken with her...as she was not his type of girl...

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Shlok was sitting alone in the garden playing games on his mobile as he was not interested in history class...when astha came and sit beside him...

Astha:Hi shlok...

He made a irritated face seeing her...

Astha:Would you like to buy some tickets????...I am raising money for the new ashram started by principal sir...

Shlok coldly said no...

Astha:By the way are you going to visit nihal???...he is in hospital...poor guy got beaten only because of your prank...she showed sympathy for him...

No...this time he answered more rudely...

Astha:I am totally a fool...still asking questions ...when i know your answer will always be a no...she said in a low voice...

Shlok:If you wanna talk with me then say it directly...and if not then stop pressurizing me for things i don't want to do...

Astha:Don't assume things when u knew nothing about me...

Shlok:I know u very well...

''You are astha kirloskar...a simple girl who loves to spend time with books and nature...
You uses a age old problematic mobile phone..looks at your feet while walking...likes to sit at the corner table so no one can disturb you...and still you have no boyfriend...or i should say... no one wanted to have you as their girlfriend...and for fun you spend your time in city ashram with people who are tooo much older than you...
he smirked after completing his speech...

Astha:Shlok you said you know me very well...but i haven't heard anything new about me...what you told me is quite predictable...i mean every single person of college knows this much about me...

Shlok smiled sarcastically...you really don't care what people think about you astha???...

Astha:No, I don't...because i really don't have time to think about all this as i have already much to do...

She leave the place with a smile...shlok was stuck in her strangeness for a while but then he continued playing his game saying that she is mad and will make me tooo...

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In the evening everyone left after college and shlok was alone there cursing the principal...as seeing his careless behavior towards studies today principal gave him assignment with the deadline of one day...he was worried as he never listened to a single lecture on the subject...and now he was asked to make assignment on dozen of chapters...

His head was spining badly by the time he entered library...
There were few people around but obviously either tooo senior or tooo junior to him...
But still he couraged to ask help from a senior...

At first he was ignored by him but on asking again...the guy started shouting...cann't you see i don't want to help you...go and ask your father... he will help you here tooo...

The answer was so rude to make him punch the guy...

Shlok:Now you will tell me what should i do or not...

Hearing the noises all the people gathered at the table...and separated them...

After getting a few punches from shlok the guy felt better in leaving the place...

After exchange of few hot words with the librarian shlok was about to sit on a empty table...when his eyes fell on astha sitting at the farthest table from his...she was staring him tooo with strange eyes...

Shlok:Oh the bookworm witnessed the fight tooo...thats why she is looking at me like i have murdered someone...he ignored her and pulled out one of the chair to sit...

He was changing pages one after the other...scratching his head...Oh God...How I am gonna do this...its tooo much and beyond my understanding power...

As he lifted his gaze he again found her staring at him...but then suddenly she shifted her eyes to her book...

For some time they were stealing glances at each other...

Shlok:I know she is sooo weird but am i looking weird tooo...i mean whats wrong with her???...why she is inspecting me like this????...he muttered looking at the other side...

For next 5 minutes he was thinking of some solution to his problem...suddenly the idea to take help from that bookworm astha clicked inside his mind...

At first he rejected the idea but thinking no other way out he thought to give it a try...

He took his book with himself and slolwy walked to her table...and without any permissions sit on the chair next to her shifting her bag on the table...

Shlok:Hi astha...

Astha:Hi...she said softly...

Shlok:Actually...i am here to...he was busy selecting appropriate words...but before he could complete astha spoke...

Astha:to ask me to help you in your studies...she said directly...

Shlok was a bit surprised at her straight forward nature...

Shlok:well yeah i am here for same reason...so will you??...

Astha:I have no problem in helping you but you have to promise me something...

Shlok:To Promise you what????...

Astha:That you will never try to flirt with me or fall in love with me...

Shlok spontaneously laughed off at her strange remark...what she thinks of herself...a princess or some angel????...inside his mind he made fun of her...and thought...''she will be the last girl on this planet i would ever flirt or fall in love with''...

Astha:What are u thinking now...have u any problem with my condition????
Shlok smiled...no...i have no problem...i promise u... we will nothing more than mere friends...


Precap:

What will happen when despite his promise to astha his heart will no longer listen to his mind?????


Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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