Ashlok ff -Janam -3 shots part2 updated on pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start
Continue soon 😊
Do pm me plz 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept...please write soon!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting concept Raji. Curious to know what tragic happened. Waiting for tomorrow to read the first part.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i hope nothing bad will happen to astha and ashlok baby...plz..continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ashloks ff : Janam- 3shots

PART 1 :

Thursday night 8pm

Shlok : Aastha ...Aastha...
Aastha ( inside her room): hah ...ha...shlok ...
Shlok landed his body on the couch and laid his head back with closed eyes.
Shlok : Aastha am very tired please make cold cofee for me...
Aastha : ok shlok ...just wait 5min...
Shlok : yaar jaldhi karo na ( yaar make it fast na)...Aastha
Aastha hurriedly spalsh water on her face and made strighten herself and hide her wrist inside her saree pallu . she took coffee mug and went to living room.
Aastha : shlok ...aapki cold coffee
Shlok made her sat on his lap and took a mug from her hand and hav a sip from it and he made her drank too after finishing the mug .
He placed his hands on her tummy, so my choti aastha ne kuch kaha...
Suddenly aasthas face covered with a weird expression.she is scared and confused too.she hug him tightly .shlok to hug her back when he felt her grip tighten.He broke the hug abruptly and noticed her fear in her eyes.
Shlok : what happened Aastha,why are U looking so dull and scared is there any problem?
She immediately get tensed and felt nervous
Aastha : problem kya problem ...there is nothing ...shlok.
Shlok : Aastha please tell the truth I saw fear in ur eyes ...so tell wat...is the ...problem he stressed his each word.
Aastha : No shlok ,I am perfectly alright,yeah am little scared about delivery so may be U felt it on my eyes.
Shlok : Aastha R u ok na ...koi pain tho nahin na.shall I call the the doctor.
Aastha : No no shlok I am perfectly alright may b its just a moodswing.
Shlok : well, moodswings for that solution hein mere pass said he leaned to kiss her.He place a peck on her lips.
Shlok : Aastha i dont know y but i felt ur hiding something from me.R u sure u r alright.
Aastha : shlok wat is this shlok,i said na koi problem nahin see am fine see... she twirled herself
Shlok : Aastha careful aastha ...ek bachha ki maa banne wali ho lemon kuth bacho ki tharah behave karthi hoon.(already ur going to be mom of one child but still behaving like a kid)
Aastha : Mein kid hoon ...she pouted...go I will not talk with u
Shlok : ok Baba I was just kidding
They sat on cough and turned on the tv.
Suddenly shlok mobile begins to rang ,varad name displayed on the screen.shlok move form there to attend the call.
After finish the call shlok return to aastha his face was full of rage.He saw aastha tuned the channels aimlessly shlok took the remote from his hand through it on the wall.
He remove the saree from her wrist .
Shlok( with a frim tone) :wat is this aastha how did this happen?
Aastha : wo shlok ...wo ...ab
Shlok : Aastha I want only truth already I know everything,varad told everything to me but I want confirmation from ur side.
Aastha : Shlok wo ab ...abay...
Aastha told shlok wat happened afternoon
Thurday ,4pm at white rose garden
Aastha feeling so tired and suffocating in her room .she want to feel some fresh air.so she went to walk on nearby garden.He held 9 months tummy in her hand and made each steps carefully.
Suddenly a rough hand crushed her tiny wrist from back.she turned to see whom it is.To her shock it was abay.
Aastha: U R here...u R in jaill na...u R here means...
Abay: with a mocking tone ...means I escaped from jail.
Aastha: How...how ... u escaped from the jail..wat R u doing here ...
Abay :He laughed like a manic u..u ruined my life .u and ur husband put me behind the bars and u help that bi*** jyothi to get married ur cousin.wat u think uaastha ha u will do anything to me i just simply sats in the jail and watch ur drama ...nope then ur wrong mrs.Aastha agnihothri..
U scattered my dream .U snached my happiness from my life So now its my turn i assure i will ruin ur dream.Then he look her tummy u make my wife againt me and brought that child to this world na.I will kill ur baby his/her feet never touch this world.
He took the knife from his packet aastha gulped hard and pushed him with her entire force and start run from there.He fell on floor becaz of sudden force.
she is sweating badly ,she is panting its very difficult for her to run in this stage suddenly a car came across them she saw varad in that car .
When varad saw abay he immediately get out of the car and catch him and informed to the police. They came there and arrest him . Put him behind the bars again.
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After hearing everything from her shlok steamed in anger.Thats it ,it took him edging his wrath.
How dare he ,how dare he try to harm U .No I never let him .I will make his life like a hell.He will get punishment wat he did .He held her arm and aastha U y didn't U tell this before.Hun...He roared .And he moved towards the door.
Aastha : shlok please listen...pls listen to me ... MERI KASAM U won't do anything to him.He already caught by police.But shlok not in the condition,the anger make him too loose his control he didn't listen her he keep move on .
Aastha held his hand pls shlok no this is not right time.
Shlok : when did he try to harm my tai i hav too kill him that day itself but i reminds silent only because of U.But today he cross his limits i won't spare him this time U just stay away from this matter said he through her hand very forcely.
Aasthas suddenly she felt a pain in her stomach she clenched her tummy and let out a scream " shlok".
He turned to see her he stunned after saw her state she was on floor .
Shlok ran to her and scoope her head and place it on his lap.
Shlok : Aastha,Aastha wat happen ...aastha
Aastha : sh...shlok. ...it... its paining shlokk...ahhh Shlok ...
He scoope her in his arms and move towards his car .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
me first...great update...
poor asthu...😭

i really think one day in the show Abhay might be back and try to hurt Astha
Edited by Serviana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yasna love U dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.

Awesomeee update raji

Thank U dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
oh my god this is the reason behind her accident

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