Ashlok ff -Janam -3 shots part2 updated on pg8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai girls ,
I am getting bored today so try to write something.ok now a days I always think about ebp.Wat is going to happen now,wat will after here after .so i came here with something.so guys please bear me for some time.
Prolouge :
Hospital sanjeevani ,Friday, past twelve in noon
He was sitting on that steal bench.Though he was sitting there felts tsunami inside his heart.Her each screams stabs inside his heart .His face was covered with sweat beads.He is none other than the mighty shlok agnihothri ,he never felt this much weakness in his whole life.His gaze fixed on the red light of the operation threator where the doctors took his aastha.

After the teriffic truth revealed NA lost his mental stability.Shlok not able to tolerate his god like fathers true face.He went out from agnihothri mansion with aastha.He insist anjali to came with him.But she refused becaz she hav to look after NA.
shlok find a new job and bought a new flat.He lead a life happily with his aastha.Aastha who is an angle brought light in his life.Aastha the hope for his survival.They felt happy and content with their tiny world.
When Aastha told him that he is going to be a father he was on could nine.Like a child he jumbed in hospital .And distributed a sweet to his whole apartment.They live happily .Everything went really very well except that tragetic night
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Ok girls thanks for spending time with me.so all the versions of comments are welcome .will post part1 tomorrow.
Thank U girls .EBP rocks😃
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Aishaa3 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Ashlok baby bt wat tragc hapnd?😔 c.s
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds Interesting :D
Pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope it happens in serial too...
Ashlok should leave that pagalkhana! And start fresh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Aww Ashlok baby bt wat tragc hapnd?😔 c.s

yes dear ,tragedy but i assure U its will be a happy ending story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting..
Will be waiting for the update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Sounds Interesting :D
Pls update soon

Thanku dear I will update tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jassi87

I hope it happens in serial too...
Ashlok should leave that pagalkhana! And start fresh

Yes dear I to want they went out from that pagal house
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice start waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great raji. Ashlok as parents!!
Continue soon

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