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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2
it was just wowww

thanks dear 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Yeh thats a good idea, I've seen a lot of cousin marriages taking palce, so I would love to read about one😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

Meerab please dont stop writing this fiction, I love it😛

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Part2

Shlok was so much busy in drinking wine that when that beautiful girl came and sat on the bar stool next to him..he didn't notice even for once...

''Hi I am Elena''...the girl extended her hand ...

Shlok who was ready to pour down one more wine glass in his system at once stopped..turned and scanned the girl from top to bottom...''hey i have seen u somewhere''...he pointed his finger towards her...

Elena:Yeah we already know each other...but its strange that we haven't talked before...
Shlok:really...but how???...his voice was shaky because of tooo much drinking...

Elena:Well we are in same class shlok...you must have seen me like I do ...

Shlok scratched his head...in class...and then he suddenly remember that she is really his classfellow...he had already seen her in their college sooo many times with engin...she was his friend...but why she is here sitting next to me...a question came to his mind ...

Shlok:but elena why are u here???...i mean what you want from me???...

Elena:Shlok i just saw you drinking so i thought its time to talk to you about it...
Shlok:about what????...
Elena: about astha and engin...
Shlok felt a deep pain inside his heart as he heard their name together...
Shlok:About astha and engin...
Elena:yeah shlok about them...she paused for a second and then said...can we talk somewhere else?...as i feel thats not the right place...

Shlok agreed as he was confused that what she wants to tell him...sooo many doubts were rising in his mind about engin...he was getting worried for astha...

They both walked together to the nearby park...and sat on the bench...

Shlok: elena what you want to tell me about engin and astha...is engin a bad guy...he wants to take advantage of astha or what????...he was getting impatient to know about the information she was going to reveal...

Elena:its nothing like that shlok...engin is a nice guy...he is a foreigner that doesn't means he is wrong or bad person...she said with a little anger in her eyes...

Shlok:but why are u taking his side...when u urself are going to tell me something about him...

Elena:i think you haven't listen carefully ...its about astha and engin both...

Shlok:ok now would you like to tell me that scary secret for which you have selected this place...he almost shouted...

Elena:I know that u love astha..she said in a single breath...

Suddenly his expressions changed from that of anger to confused ones...but how you know about this...he asked ...

Elena:I can see it in your eyes shlok...I even know that u were drinking tonight because its difficult for you to see astha with someone else...u are feeling jealous seeing them going on a date...right???...

It was truth but still shlok denied...what are u trying to say elena...astha and I are just good friends...nothing like that what you are sketching...

Elena:shlok don't lie ...i know how it feels...how much it pains u when the person whom you love most in the world leaves you for someone else...

She lowered her head and pressed her hands and sadly said...I also love engin the way u love astha...she confessed...

Shlok was shocked ...''U love engin''...

Elena:yes shlok i love him sooo much...we were close friends before astha came in our lives...but then u know how your astha snatched away what was mine...

Shlok:Please elena ...don't say anything about astha...i will not tolerate this all...your engin is not a kid ...he knows whats good for him...so don't blame astha...

Elena:I am sorry...i don't wanted to blame her...I just wanted to say that if she had not entered our lives..engin would have been mine only...I tried to tell him my feelings but astha was tooo fast for it...

Elena:I tried to be normal but now i cann't control any more...I don't want to lose him at any cost...

Shlok:But what you want from me ????...

Elena:I need your help shlok...

Shlok:Help and from me???he said in a sarcastic and broken voice...''but how could I help you when astha and engin both feel for eachother''???...

Elena:No u can help me shlok by making astha realize that how much you love her...so that she leaves my engin...

Shlok was staring her in confusion...U mean????

Elena:Yeah shlok I want u to act with me as if we are in a affair...i mean as a boyfriend girlfriend...i am sure this will help and we will plan things so that they will breakup and come back to us...

Shlok:one second... u want me to cheat astha...but sorry thats never gonna happen...he stood up from there in anger...

Shlok:Elena you are right that ''i love astha more than myself but i will never cheat her''...get this thing in your head...

Elena:ok fine...but tell me one thing...it will make no difference to you when engin will touch your astha...when he will kiss her...or when he will...she stopped...and then shouted ...I don't know how you can tolerate all this when i cann't even see him hugging someone else...

Shlok shouted back...just shut up...i dont want to listen to you anymore...and he walked out...

Elena:I know you are emotional right now but just think about it once with calm mind...u will understand what i said is not wrong...i just want to get my love back...

She was shouting...on his back while he didn't stop for once and immediately left the place...and drove back to his apartment...

It was almost midnight and astha was still outside dating...
Shlok was already upset with what elena said and now this irresponsible behavior of astha was adding more to his anxiety and anger...

He was checking his mobile again and again to see some message from her but everytime he was disappointed...

It was 2:am and still there was no sign of astha...he started drinking again...then after a few seconds he heard the noice of some vehicle in the silence of the night...he placed his glass on the table...and immediately rushed to his room's window...

Astha came out of engin's car...her glowing face was telling that she had spent really good time with him...

Engin came out from his side of car and pulled her for a good bye kiss...

At first astha was shy but then their faces were slowly moving closer to eachother...and for shlok this sight was quite impossible to tolerate...

He just wanted to kill engin right there for touching her astha like this...his anger touched the extremes...

Elena's words whispered in his ears...''tell me one thing...it will make no difference to you shlok when engin will touch your astha...when he will kiss her...or when he will..I don't know how you can tolerate all this when i cann't even see him hugging someone else''...

And as astha and engin's lips were about to meet...shlok picked the vase from the table next to him and threw it on the window in extreme anger and jealously...the whole window glass broke into small pieces the same way his heart was breaking...

Hearing the sudden loud sound astha backed out from the kiss...

She worried that what happened suddenly and then the thought of shlok came to her mind...is he alright????...

She said goodbye to engin in a hurry ...asking him to leave...and rushed inside the apartment with confusion...calling out shlok's name...

Precap:

Shlok:Elena you were right...i cann't tolerate someone else near him...i want her in my life...and i am ready for your plan...

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...Ayesha...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Woww, new entry in the story Elena! Hmmm she like Engin and Shlok likes Astha, seems like a good match😃 Feel sorry for Shlok, seeing Astha with somebody else😔 Would love to see how Astha would react when she finds out Shlok and Elena are dating😉 Another amazing update Meerab👏👏 continue sooon🤗

Edited by ...Ayesha... - 11 years ago

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Loved it! Poor shlok...feel so sorry for him.

I am happy with Elena's entry, esp. after knowing that she is in love with Engin and wants to separate Engin from Astha 😃 It's good that there is someone who can take care of Engin for us 😉

Wow Astha and Engin were about to kiss? 😲 I think reading that part I was almost as nervous as Shlok 😆😆 I was constantly thinking, Shlok plz don't let her 😆 Good that he took some action out of anger 😃

I am loving the way you are taking this story forward. It is already sounding interesting. The precap is excitng too. So now I guess we will see Shlok and Elena pretending to be GF & BF 😆 Can't wait!! 😛

Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago