Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: AshesToDust
it will knock on your door too...

Inshallah...waiting for the moment with bated breath 😊

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Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...
i will knock on your dooor

🤣 Gosh kiddo I missed ur crazy pics and emoticons so much 🤗

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Originally posted by: Sam_15

Inshallah...waiting for the moment with bated breath 😊

dont worry inshallah the day will come😃

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...Ayesha...

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Originally posted by: Sam_15

🤣 Gosh kiddo I missed ur crazy pics and emoticons so much 🤗

hahaha🤣🤗

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Originally posted by: AshesToDust
crazy kid

i'll take that as a compliment😎

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Samia

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: AshesToDustPM
update soon.

Will try yaar. Don't know why but my mind seems to be frozen 😆😆 It goes blank when I start writing. The ideas are there but unable to pen them satisfactorily 😵 So I might need more time

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i know i just needed one post to be a groupbie there...rofl... take your time...

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Samia

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Originally posted by: AshesToDust
i know i just needed one post to be a groupbie there...rofl... take your time...

Thanks 😳 I guess I have just got too much on my mind right now.

Anywaaayss...so why did u make a new account?

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

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while i wasnt writing anythng here. i wrote stuff on other forums. thora sa... This account has all my ashlok readers only. so to facilitate new readers i made new account.

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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First of all sorry for late reply but as i promised to unres in my vacations so here i am ...

Chapter 6

Wow ...it was a beautiful update samia...loved the way u described every minor detail abt the room and astha's dress and morever astha's feelings...
You summed up everything so perfectly dear...⭐️

Chapter 7

So mr.akdu not love her but still wanted to see her in bridal dress and expected her to behave like a bride in every way...😉
But i am glad that astha showed him that she is not weak but a strong girl...😛
And the way shlok threatened astha about intimacy...lovely part😆😆😆...naughty shlok
The dialogues,the intensity and all ashlok fight ...it was outstanding...u just nailed it samia with ur writing dear...😳
Power-packed is the right word for this update...
I want to give u a standing ovation👏

Chapter8

Ahaaan here starts the real hubby wifey story...enjoyed it fully astha payed equally for his every action and the way she was ready to make excuses for his absence...great going...i m totally loving this astha...😳

And the last part was damn cute and sweet...
How they played ludo...lovely😳... i liked that astha happily accepted that she lose the game and how she pulls shlok with her...awesome...

Samia kaisey manage kar leti ho har baar itni mindblowing updates...i am becoming ur pankhi now😳...

Really u have great writing skills my dear👏...

Chapter 9

Awww...thats the update i liked the most...so they are getting used to each others presence with time but the teasing and taunting dose is still there😃...but i guess with the mention of ashlok's name teasing and taunting is sooo natural...

Hayeee the part where he comes out half-naked and our tinu astha was drooling over him...so was i ...still i can imagine him that way.....😆😆😆...

And that needle and shirt scene amazing...really enjoyed how she poked him repeatedly...maza aa gaya...shlok must have enjoyed it tooo as he wanted the filmi touch na😉...

But i am liking that shlok still cares for astha's comfort...😳

And the last pasrt was epic...😳
So cute...😳
So lovely😳
And sooo emotional at the same time...😊
He wanted to tease her with swati's call but end up hurting her ...awww...i feel bad for our astha...😭
But now eagerly waiting that what he will do to console her...and i wish astha not forgives him that easily this time...😡

And now after all these mindblowing updates i wanna say that please update the next part really soon...cann't wait anymore...😳

Update😃
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