Aaslok: beyond the limit part 8 21/5/2014

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

wooow great update!!!

you know i was not that attached to this story like i am to your other story...but now i am more and more interested...😃

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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lechu

@-LECHU-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

This is indeed an awsome piece of writing👏 👏

Though the starting made us sad,as story gained pace

it become more gripping...

that unknown spark,the eyelocks and those special moments

between ashlok so beautifully penned

you are just awsome yaar⭐️👏

Edited by -LECHU- - 11 years ago

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seeheeryou

@seeheeryou

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

This was really an awesome update.. It's for astha that shlok felt love at the very first sight! It's a pleasant twist in the tale!!! Now astha come to know it and shlok knows it already,how??? Very very excited to read further updates! Update soon,pls...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

what a beautiful twist.It was with Aastha that shlok had fallen in luv.knowing that aastha is trying 2 avoid him.Oh no...hope in d next update shlok finds out the truth.he is rly feeling 4 her

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k.taddy1234

@k.taddy1234

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Nice updated... what a twist

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: hajr
Awesome
What will how mum do when she finds out he loved Aastha not Swati?
Can't wait for next update.

thanks but what about mum i could not get you properly😕

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: rbb1
great update thank you, OMG I feel bad for both of them

thanks but why are you feeling sad 😊

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: Serviana
wooow great update!!!
you know i was not that attached to this story like i am to your other story...but now i am more and more interested...😃

thanks dear i know you were not interested because as like everyone you also didnt like Swati in his life😆