Aaslok: beyond the limit part 8 21/5/2014

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

Now I really want to read the next part

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: -LECHU-
This is indeed an awsome piece of writing👏 👏
Though the starting made us sad,as story gained pace
it become more gripping...
that unknown spark,the eyelocks and those special moments
between ashlok so beautifully penned
you are just awsome yaar⭐️👏

thanks dear

your writing is also gripping me

i know that it is bit sad then my other story but i want to write something different this time 😊

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: anu123.
This was really an awesome update.. It's for astha that shlok felt love at the very first sight! It's a pleasant twist in the tale!!! Now astha come to know it and shlok knows it already,how??? Very very excited to read further updates! Update soon,pls...

how??????????

it will reveal soon 😊

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
what a beautiful twist.It was with Aastha that shlok had fallen in luv.knowing that aastha is trying 2 avoid him.Oh no...hope in d next update shlok finds out the truth.he is rly feeling 4 her

this is not an ordinary love