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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
hai guys...
here is the part 3...

Part 3:

(Shlok keeps on searching for Astha...)

Shlok: Ek minute...I think she won't be there...(saying this he rushes to canteen)

(there he sees Astha sleeping, surrounded by 2 mazaa bottles and 3 lays packets)

Shlok: (laughs for 2 minutes by closing his mouth without making any noice and goes near her, now with so much anger he wakes her) Astha!! Astha!!

Astha: (wakes like a kid, scratches her head, sees Shlok with sleepy eyes and smiles at him) S..H..L..O..KKK!!!!

Shlok: Pagli! Don't you have any sense? Kya natak hai yeh?

Astha: (sees around her and again gives a smile to Shlok) Can't you see? I was waiting for you...

Shlok: Waiting? You even finished your tomorrow's breakfast...

Astha: What? I didn't eat these...(she burps)

(Shlok sees Astha with the world's worst expression)

Astha: (sees this and tries to pretend) Chalo Shlok, Pooja hai na...come on...(she starts to walk)

Shlok: OMG! What will I do with this pagli? Wait ...wait...(he follows her)

(they reach home, without changing dress Astha enters into pooja.)

Niranjan, Avdoot, Anjali: Astha, why were you late? OK OK...come and join the pooja...

Sojal: (gives eye sign) What happened?

Astha: (gives sign) I will tell you in room.

Jyothi: (sees their sign conversation and gives a sign to Astha) I am also coming to your room.

Shlok: (sees the entire scene among them) BAPPA!!!

Varad: Kya hua Shlok?

Shlok: (whispers to Varad) see that pagli...without even changing her dress...not even washing face...what is she thinking? Even before the boy she likes, she don't want to be fresh and beautiful...see Bhabhi(saying about Sojal) how pretty is she?

Varad: Kya???? BHABHI???? (he stares at Shlok) Pretty??(he laughs) full make up...yeh pooja hai yaar!! Itna make up!!! Are we going to some function? It's just a family pooja...I really hate this...see Astha...she is so simple...that makes her so cute and beautiful...

(without knowing their conversation Astha and Sojal give a smile at them...)

Varad: (smiles at Astha)(gives mouth sign) cute lag rahe ho?

Astha: (gives mouth sign) Thank you baiya!!!

Shlok: (smiles at Sojal)(gives action) so beautiful didi...

(Sojal smiles at Shlok)

(Pooja gets over, Everyone finish their dinner and go to bed)

(next day morning while eating breakfast)

Niranjan: (knocks the table to get everyone's attention) Aaj Mukesh ki beti ki engagement hai...he has invited us all...so we are going and we will be back only at night...ok?

(Everyone nod their head as they are accepting)

Shlok: (interrupts) Papa!! I can't attend...actually I have to submit my project in two days, so I am sorry...Yeh Pagli(everyone sees him)mmm...Astha...you too don't go

Astha: (with most excitement)Ok...of course...(gets up from her chair)I am not coming...

Jyothi: Papa!! Mein bhi nahin aa pavungi. Mujhe bhi project karna hai...

Astha: (gives eye sign to jyothi) You too...with us...(with a sad expression)

Jyothi: (whispers) No...don't worry... I am going to Abay's house...

(Both of them smile at each other and Sojal sees them , she too smiles. Everyone leave the house leaving Shlok and Astha alone. )

(After some time, Astha jumps like a kid and tries to enter Shlok's room)

Shlok: (pulls her back by her collar) Where are you going?

Astha: To your room...we have to do project na...

Shlok: No, you are not coming to my room...

Astha: Kyon?

Shlok: You will take something from there to keep it with you like every time you are do(Astha has taken so many things from his room to keep as a treasure from Shlok)...so we are doing in your room...

(Astha keeps a sad face and goes to her room unwillingly, Shlok follows her. There he sees her room filled with SRK's pictures)

Shlok: (with shock) What are these...pictures?

Astha: (gives a lovely, cute, shy smile)SHAHRUKH KHAN...(she stares at the picture with a dreamy look)

Shlok: (sees her romantic dreamy expression)mmm...enough...enough...stop dreaming...there is lot to do for us...it's already past 3pm...fast...

(both do their project for long time despite Astha's actions and reactions. Suddenly the lights get off .)

Astha: Oh no...what is this?

Shlok: OMG!! Why the hell now...

Astha: (sees other houses from window)It's ok... I think , it would be a fuse problem...Shlok, you go and correct the fuse.

Shlok: What?? Me?? No way...

(Astha pushes him from behind. Shlok stands on a stool and Astha holds it...)

Shlok: (tries for a long time) I can't do this...(he gets down)

Astha: ok, you hold the stool , I will do it(climbs on the stool and gives a bahadhur expression)

( While speaking to her Shlok leaves the stool. Astha is about to fall but he holds her in his hand. Astha gives lovey doovey expression at him. Shlok sees her expression and puts her down.)

Shlok: Oyy pagli...don't dream too much. We will do the project in candle light...chalo...

Astha: (tries to get up but she couldn't because her legs got sprained) Shlok!! Shlok!! I can't get up...

Shlok: Oy...Pagli...don't do too much drama...get up and follow me soon...

Astha: Really Shlok...I am saying the truth(she tries to get up but falls down)

Shlok: (sees her) OMG!! Really you are so annoying...

Astha: Don't spout...I became like this because of you only...since you left me down...

Shlok: SHH!!! Shut up! (he lifts her in his hands and starts walking to his room)

Astha: (smiling at him) If you had not put me down that time, it would have not become like this...

Shlok: If you speak another word...

(The lights glow suddenly. All the family members enters into the house and see Astha in Shlok's hands)

Shlok and Astha: (see each other and also the family members)

PAPA!!!!(Shlok to Niranjan)

PAPA!!!!(Astha to Avdoot)


hope u guys liked it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Nice update, OMG I feel bad for Astha I think she needs to stop dreaming about him and she shouldn't give him to much importance then he will start to think about her

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
nice update...
a..aaa...Astha in Shlok arms OMG
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
I just loved ur story a lot ...it was soo different ...bt astha is giving so much attention to shlok ...
Update the next part soon ..I am looking forward for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
thank you for ur wonderful comments guys...am so happy that u all love this story line...once again thank you for ur support
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
nice update
astha in shlok hands
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
hai guys...
am again here with the part 4

Part 4:

(Everyone in the family see Astha in Shlok' hands. They all stare at them.)

Astha: Aap log aa gaye...(she smiles at everyone)

Shlok: (with shock in his eyes) Actually Papa, kya hua na...(he tries to explain the situation)

(everyone stare at them first, then leave the place as if nothing happened)

Shlok: (with confusion) What happened to everyone?

(Astha tries to be more comfortable in his hands by adjusting her position)

Shlok: (realizes and shouts) Yah...are you mad?

(he drops her down and leaves the place)

Astha: (in a 10:10 position) aah!!! How can he leave me...

(Varad comes and lifts Astha, Sojal follows him...)

Varad: (shouts at Sojal) Kya...mere peeche peeche aathi ho...go and open the door...

(to Astha, in a very caring voice, with a slight smile) Kya hua Astha?

Shlok: (follows Niranjan to his room) Papa! Astha's leg got sprained , so I lifted her...

Niranjan: Shlok, I am so tired...I will go to sleep...OK!

(Shlok wonders at his father's reactions, he goes to the kitchen)

Shlok: (like a child) Mama!! What happened to papa? Actually he didn't even listen to my explanation...

Anjali: Sholk, it's too late to talk now...go to bed, mmm...(she leaves)

Shlok: (stops Anjali by turning her shoulders) Mama!!!

Anjali: (pinches him in his cheek) Stop it!! Everyone knows...no need to worry about it...(she leaves the place with a very pleasant smile at him)

Shlok: (in a frustration) Kya hua sabko? They are not even listening to my explanations...I will just ask baiyaa...

(he goes to his room, Varad welcomes him by holding his hands so politely)

Varad: Ayiye Sir, Baitiye...

Shlok: (with anger) Baiyaa!! Please!!

Varad: (laughs at him, seeing his anger tries to control it) Hey, First I should get married, Ok?

Shlok: What the...(understands the meaning) Are you mad? Me? Wo pagli? OMG!!!(starts to laugh by rolling on the bed)

Varad: Stop it! Don't over act! I know everything... I just told you to wait for some time since I am the first son na...

Shlok: Oh please , I am going to sleep...(covers the whole body by the blanket)

(Next day morning...)

(Everyone are having their breakfast...)

Niranjan: I want to discuss an important matter today...so I want everyone to come home soon...OK? Especially Varad, you...

Varad: Ok papa...(leaves for office)

(Astha and Jyothi starts to discuss over that matter, Anjali gives a beating on their heads)
Anjali: Don't be so curious...you will be knowing it today...go to college...

(Like every day, Jyothi leaves for college first and Astha goes with Shlok. But she is so silent thinking about something...)

Shlok: (surprised by her) Oy! Chatter box! Kya hua? You are so silent today...

Astha: (hugs him for balance) What would be the matter...

Shlok: (stops the bike and takes her hand off his hip) Get down...your pagal friends are waiting...

(after getting down too Astha walks to them(Jyothi and Abhay) thinking)

Shlok: (sees her) OMG...(smirks) Pagli...

(in the evening)

Niranjan: I think everyone are here...where is Astha and Jyothi?

Astha: (enters with Jyothi and Abhay) Uncle we are here...

(Abhay greets everyone...)

Shlok: (with a disgusting look) Why did he(referring Abhay) come now?

Niranjan: Varad, Sojal...I...no We all think that you too should get married now...

(hearing this Sojal is so happy...Astha and Jyothi hugs her. Shlok and Abhay congrats her...)

Varad: Sorry Papa!! I can't ...that too her...never...(he leaves to his room angrily. Shlok follows him...)

Niranjan: Varad!! Varad!! Kya hua isko?

(hearing his rejection Sojal runs into her room crying. Astha, Jyothi and Abhay follows her to the room...)

(After some time Astha calls Shlok to meet in the garden...)

Shlok: (sees the three Pagals(according to him)) What?

Astha: Do you like my sister marrying Varad baiyaa?

Shlok: ya...of course...

Astha: Then...I...no...we think(including Jyothi and Abhay) that we have to do something to unite them...

Shlok: What? Me? With you three?

Abhay: Arey! Aa na yaar!! Mein hoon na!!!

Shlok: That's why it's so fear...

Jyothi: oh please, you two shut up...hey Shlok you are joining us that's final...

(Astha, Abhay and Jyothi held their hands as a team, Shlok hesitates, Astha pulls his hand and keeps it over them)

Astha, Jyothi, Abhay: Hip hip hurray!!!!!

Shlok: (with fear and confusion) OMG!! What is going to happen because of these PAGALS?

hope u guys liked it...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update. It was very cute. Will be waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its really good. Just read all 4 chapters... very interesting n yet simple. Loving it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

PART-5

Shlok: pata nahi iss theeno milkar kya pagal pan kareenga...😕😕

All three (Jyoti,Abhay,Aastha) were pacing in the garden...(Shlok gave a weird look seeing them...)😲😲

Aastha: Idea...😛😛

Abhay: What...What...😉😉...(Abhay came running ...Jyoti catches his arms......)

Jyoti: Where are you running...? Listen from here even...😕😕😕

Aastha: Today, we are all going to that business party na...somewhat we will make didi n bhai to come together...n we will arrange some goons to stop them on their way...n misbehave to didi...n our hero...(Shlok gave a weird look)...matlab Varad bhai will get angry n fight with goons...😡😡...then automatically love will bloom between them...😳😳😳

Abhay: superb...super ...what a brilliant idea...!😊😊😊

Jyoti: Will it work...?😕😕

Shlok: Stupid idea......it wont work......do you people really have brain...😡😡? where from, you get all these useless ideas...😕😕...?

Aastha: I've seen many films n serials...to bring hero n heroine closer the directors use this scene only...😳😳...It will definitely work...😉😉

Jyoti: Not sure...but hope it will work a little...

Abhay: I'll ask some of our friends to act as goons...I'll ask their help..(Abhay goes to call them...)

In the evening...

Anjali: Are you people ready...can we leave now...? what is this Aastha still you are not ready...😲😲

Aastha: Oh, actually ...mey facial kar rahethi...I'll be ready within 30 minutes...😳😳...

Shlok: 30 minutes...😲😲...you are not going to attend your wedding...😡😡...even for that it wont take these much time...😕😕

Aastha sighed him...seeing Varad bhai...Jyoti understood it...

Jyoti: Ok...we will all come together...you all go...😉😉

Varad: Ok, Aastha come soon...😛😛

Jyoti: Oh...bhai...I think she will take more time...you n didi go first...we will come together...( Sojal gets excited...😳😳...)

Varad: No, it's not a problem...we will wait for Aastha...😊😊

Jyoti hits her head n drags Varad to a corner...

Varad: Bhai cant you understand...Aastha wants to come with Shlok alone...so only she is doing all these...you go first...

Varad: oh...oh...ok ok...😳😳...then come we all three will go together...😉

Jyoti: haan...haan...😛😛...kya...nahi...nahi...😲😲...Actually I've some work...I cant come with you...

Varad: Ok...fine...Sojal come let us go...

Sojal shows all her 32 teeth in excitement...😃😃...n nods...

Sojal n Varad leave...

Aastha who is hiding behind the pillar...Shows thumbs up to Jyoti...👍🏼

Sojal turns back:Jyoti,Shlok,Abhay n Aastha sighs happily...👍🏼

Aastha: Come on Shlok...we can go...Shlok see here I'm wearing the same color salwar as of yours shirt...😳😳...same pinch...(Aastha was about to pinch him...But Shlok moves back...😆😆..)

Shlok: what...you told you need more time...anyways Abhay you drive the car...

Jyoti:No,Shlok...Actually I want to buy some gifts for Amrita's birthday...so you n Aastha go...we will come later...(Aastha smiles hearing this)

Abhay: Nahi...nahi...no...no...

Jyoti: Nobody is asking your permission...🥱🥱...Actually you select better gifts...so only...come come...let us go...

Jyoti drags Abhay n leaves...

Shlok: Oh no, now I need to go with this pagal...😕😕...Oh God please save me...😲😲...

Aastha holds his hands...come on Shlok...

Shlok n Aastha leaves...

In the party,

Rajashekar welcomes them...😊😊

Rajashekar: Welcome...welcome...my dear friends...How are you...? Where are your children...? It has been a long time since I have met them...😊😊

Varad: You still remember us uncle...😊😊

Rajashekar: Arey Varad..How r u...? N How are you Sojal beta...?😊😊

Sojal: We are fine uncle ...How are you...?😊😊

Neha: Dad is perfectly alright...😊😊

Anjali: Arey Neha beti kaisey ho tum...?😊😊

Neha: Fine aunty...😊😊

Rajashekar: Come on Avdhoot ...I'll introduce you to my other business partners...

After some time...

Varad: Where are these people...?

Shlok is driving the car n Aastha admires him...😳😳

Suddenly car starts to jerk...

Shlok: Now what happened to this car...?

Shlok comes out to check what was the problem...😕😕

Aastha finds something abnormal n she comes out of the car...

In the party,

Rajashekar: I need to ask you something...wo actually...apart from business partners why cant we develop a relationship...?

Niranjan blinks at him...😲😲

Rajashekar: Actually, I want Neha to get married to Varad...😕😕😕

Avdhoot,Sojal,Varad , Anjali n Niranjan are shocked to hear this...😕😕😕

Avdhoot moves n holds his heart..clinching his shirt...

On the way,

Aastha:OMG...

Shlok:What...?

Aastha: why did you bring this car...? Actually Varad bhai was supposed to take this car na...to bring them even more closer I added sugar in the petrol tank...so that they might stop in the midway like us...n they will get more time to spend together...😳😳

Shlok: What crap...? do you atleast know what you have done...? because of your stupid act now we are caught in the jungle...😡😡..

In the party,

Varad n Sojal stare at each other with a shock...😕😕

Hope you liked it...

Will continue in next part...

Do comment...

Edited by kdramafantasy - 11 years ago

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