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Posted: 11 years ago
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hai guys am back with my second SS...
this is romantic , funny family story shows only love...

[Agnihotri and kirloskar family are being friends for generations. So, Niranjan and Avdoot are staying in the same house with their family members. They are also partners in their business. Niranjan has three children- Varad(23), Shlok(20) and Jyothi(20). Jyothi and Shlok are twins. His wife is Anjali, who is the cousin of Avdoot. Avdoot wife is dead and he has two daughters- Sojal(23) and Astha(20). Abhay(20) is Astha and Jyothi's best friend and collegemate.]

(It is a busy morning...)

Anjali: Roopa, (calls the servant)...kya yeh saab? Teek se lagavo...shaam ko pooja hai na? Karo...jaldi...

(she is so busy in organizing for evening's pooja)

Niranjan and Avdoot are so busy in talking about yesterday's match...

Niranjan: Nahin yaar...defintely it would have been a wicket...

Avdoot: (tells so confidently by hitting his hand on him) Nahin...it wouldn't be...

(Both started to argue by having their morning coffee...)

A beautiful valley...Shlok stretches his hand to 180 degree and calls Astha...

Shlok: (with so much of love in his eyes and voice) ASTHA!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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NiceSS, very interesting please continue 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looking forward to the next update. Do Ashlok end up wearing matching matching clothes? Lol!
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Originally posted by: infernofyre

Looking forward to the next update. Do Ashlok end up wearing matching matching clothes? Lol!

lol that would be so funny
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you for ur wonderful comments guys...
shall I continue the story like this in descriptive manner or end it like a normal story with 8 to 10 parts...

please give me ur suggestions guys
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Posted: 11 years ago
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here is the part 2 guys...

Part 2:

(Astha is so frustrated because of Shlok.)

Sojal: (keeps her hand on Astha's shoulders) Kya hua Astha?

Astha: Didi...dekho naa...again I was fooled today...

Sojal: What???

Astha: Shlok changed his tee shirt...so...(she gives a very sad expression)

(Sojal starts to laugh at her...)

Anjali: Astha!!

Astha: haan...aunty...

Anjali: We have a pooja today evening ...so...come to home as soon as possible...ok?

Astha: (gives a smile) ok aunty...

(Sojal hits Astha and gives an eye sign that Shlok already left...)

Astha: ok...ok...I don't have time now...aunty I will come home soon...don't worry...(she waves her hand to them and leaves in a hurry burry)

(Shlok starts his bike to go to college...)

Astha: Shlok!!! Shlok!!! (waves her hand to him)

Shlok: Aagayi pagli...kya hai?(with anger)

Astha: Wait for me...(jumps on his bike to sit)

Shlok: You know that you are going to get down in that corner...then why are you so excited in coming with me?

Astha: But I will ride with you until there...(gives a funky smile...)

Shlok: (sees her like an alien) OMG!! Chalo...baito...

(Astha imagines many romantic songs while riding with him and gives so many expressions...)

Shlok: (puts a sudden brake) Oy! Stop dreaming...get down...your paagal friends are waiting for you...

(Jyothi hears this and hits him with her bag...)

Jyothi: Idiot...how dare you speak like that about your sister?

(he gives an arrogant look and leaves the place. Astha is seeing him continuously till he turns that road.)

Abay: Good morning Asthu...(with so much of love)

(but Astha doesn't listen to anything and keeps on thinking about Shlok. Jyothi hits Abay in his head...)

Jyothi: Don't you have any sense? She is not even looking at you...but you are showing all your 32 teeth...(she sees Astha who is very busy in dreaming without noticing anything around her...)

Oh My God!!! Why am I with this mad people?

[Shlok, Astha, Jyothi and Abay are studying fashion designing 2nd year]

(They reach the college and the class is about to start. Astha is looking at Shlok, by keeping her hand on her right cheek...Abay is looking at Astha by keeping his hand on his left cheek...)

Jyothi: (sees them with a disgusting look) Bappa!! Mujhe bachaayiye!!!

(Professor enters the class and informs about the project work that is to be submitted within a week. He also says them to form two members group to do the project. Suddenly Abay stands up and raises his hand...)

Professor: What Abay? With whom are you going to do?

Abay: (points his finger to Astha)Sir!!!!

Astha: (ignores him and points her finger to Shlok) I want to do with Shlok...

(All in the girls in the class except Jyothi says that they want to do with Shlok...)

Professor: (sees Shlok) What, Shlok? Whom are you going to pick?

Shlok: (remains silent for a minute) I will do it with Astha.

(Astha jumps in joy. Abay feels so depressed and goes near Astha, Jyothi hits him in his head...)

Jyothi: Why the hell are you going to her? She won't do with you idiot...we will form a group...ok?

(class ends, Shlok goes out of the class and Astha follows him...)

Astha: Shlok!! Stop, stop,stop!!! Thank you...thank you so much Shlok!(gives a big smile)

Shlok: (gives a sigh) Don't be so happy...compared to all girls, at least I know about you and we are living in the same house... I thought that it would be easy for me...so don't dream too much...

Astha: Anyway, I am happy...

Jyothi: Astha, I will go with Abay...we are going to discuss about the project. You go to home with Shlok...

(she winks at her, Abay sees this and he trys to interrupt but Jyothi closes his mouth , drags him along with her)

Astha: (says thanks to Jyothi)(to Shlok) Wait for me in the parking ...I will get my bag...

(without waiting for her Shlok leaves to home. Astha waits for him in the parking. She calls him but he is not picking it...she waits for a long time)

(In home, pooja starts and everyone is asking for Astha...)

Anjali : Shlok...where is Astha?

Shlok: Kya? Wo abi tak nahin ayi? (sees the time and he remembers) Oh, that pagal told me to wait, I think she would be waiting there for me...

(he takes his bike and rushes to college. He goes to the parking but Astha is not there...)

Shlok: Astha!! Astha!! (makes a phone call to her but it seems to be unreachable)



hope u guys liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG how could Shlok forget her, I wonder where she has gone hope she is ok
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute one😃 wonder where is astha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
shlok left asthA and went home
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
shlok left asthA and went home
continue soon.

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