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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Jst read all 8 updates
Simply amazing
Can't wait to read da nxt part
Only one request can u make it longer
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
just read all 8 parts loved all of it although it was getting a little frustrating seeing the girls desperate for their respective love for shlock and varad but chapter 7 was awesome...really liked sojals conversation with varad, her comment hit home and i like that avdoot also agreed with her about moving for a few years...chapter 8 with the guys confessing their feelings for sojal and aastha was also very nice...looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
hai guys since i was studying for my semester i couldn't post my story thank you for waiting patiently here is the part 9

Aastha came out of washroom...looked herself in the mirror...

Through the mirror she saw Shlok's photo hanging on the wall...

She went near the photo ...took the photo in her hand...

Held the photo in her left hand...swing her right hand in air...(She imagined as though Shlok

danced with her...)

Aastha: lalala...la ...la...lalala...(She swirled and hit somewhere...)

Aastha: Ah...Ahhh...

Shlok: Are you blind...?

(Aastha immediately hid the photo...)

Shlok: what are you hiding...?

Aastha: Nothing...(She moved back...)

Shlok: Show me...(Aastha moved back and started to run ...)(Shlok ran behind her...)

Aastha climbed on the bed...Shlok too climbed...Aastha tried her best to keep the photo

away from Shlok...

Jyoti: What the hell...! This is my room...not a play ground...First both of

you get down...

Jyoti pulled them down...

Jyoti: first both of you get out of my room...(Aastha giggled...)

Shlok stared at her and went out...

Jyoti:Dont know when their cat fight will end...?

In Sojal's room...

Sojal pushed Varad away...

Sojal:First, get out of my room...

Varad:No...never until you listen to me ...I wont go...

Jyoti came running into Sojal's room...She stood stunned seeing them

together...

Jyoti:Wo...actually Nani has come...

Varad got tensed ...knowing what would happen further...

Sojal gave a cold stare and took her dress and went inside...

Varad:What will I do now...? Only Shlok can help me...

Shlok's room:

Shlok:What ...where from she came now...?

In the dining table...

Nani:Wo...actually I came here to inform you something...

Everybody looked at her...

Nani:I don't want Sojal to get married now...

Varad almost knew this would happen for sure...

Avdhoot:Why what happened now...?

Nani:Sojal is now not that matured to get married...I know your her

father...but even I'm her grandmother...even I have some rights on

her...Sojal...Aastha pack your bags ...your coming with me...

Shlok was shocked to hear even Aastha is going...

Avdhoot thought of saying something...But Niranjan stopped him...Nani

left the table...

Niranjan:You know na...it is not easy to make her agree for it...we have to wait

for perfect time...

Anjali:What about the marriage...?

NA: we have to wait still she agrees...

Everybody felt bad of what is happening...

Varad's room...

Varad: it cant happen...I wont let it happen...

Jyoti came running...: bhai...didi n Aastha r leaving...

Varad n Shlok: W...H...A...T...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
thanks for the update.atleast now shlok will take some steps for improving their relation
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
I just read all the updates and they were really awesome.
Plz pm me of your updates. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
thanks for the update yaar... varad tries to convince astha to stay whereas here astha is also going with her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
hai guys am here with part 10
Varad and Shlok run out of their room to stop them but they see their Nani standing beside Sojal and Astha,seeing this they take ten steps back
Shlok: Their nani is so scary na?
they remembers what happened 10 years ago
Shlok,Astha,Sojal and Varad were playing hide & Seek with their friends
At that time Shlok-Astha hid together,on the other hand Varad-Sojal hid together
in those days Shlok really liked Astha very much and the same goes for Varad,both couples were giggling and playing together
Nani saw this scene and pinched Sholk's and Varad's ears to get them away from her grand daughters,also she warned them to never come near their granddaughters
Shlok:oh...so ...scary
Varad: Ya ,ya you are right
Sojal and Astha gave sad expressions towards Varad and Shlok and went with their nani to their village
Shlok and Varad make several plans to go to their village
Jyothi:what are you doing very seriously...oh you two are planning to go there,I am also coming with you i too miss them so much
Shlok and Varad: nooo...you are not coming
at last jyothi convinced them and they plan to go to the village by tomorrow
next day morning they said to everyone in the family and start the car
Abhay: STOP...STOP...STOP
Shlok:yeh paagal ko kisne bhulaya
Jyothi: meine...
they started to fight
Varad: Oh please...Abhay get into the car quickly
Varad drives the car,Jyothi sits beside Varad,Shlok and Abhay sit at the back facing north and south
they reach the village
Abhay opens the car window and waves his hand in the air:wow...i love this village...
Shlok gets vomiting sensation seeing that: Kaisa behave kar raha hai...heroine ki tarah...that's why i told you that i don't want this paagal to come with us
Varad and Jyothi laughed seeing this
they reach nani's home,greets nani
Varad search for Sojal here and there
Nani: kya dekh rahe ho...
Varad:wo...nani...Sojal...
nani says that they are in the farm,at once Varad runs to the farm,Shlok,Jyothi ,Abhay follows him
there they see Astha playing with puppies
Shlok: see how happy she is...and I am here...
he notices that everyone are staring at him
Shlok:no...I just said that we are wooried and she is happy there...
Abhay: wow...she is so cute na...
Jyothi hits him in his head
Astha sees them and comes like she is going to hug someone
Shlok notices this and he confirms that she is going to hug him, sees Abhay stretching his arms widely,pushes him into the field and tries to lift his hand
Astha: jijuuu...she hugs Varad tightly and Varad too hugs her back
Shlok gets really embaresed by this and Jyothi starts laughing
Varad: how are you Astha...and Sojal?
Astha: jiju ,am fine and didi is working there in the field
Varad runs to Sojal and hus her,first Sojal is stunned and after some moment she realizes and hugs him back
nani sees everthing: SOJAL...
everybody stares at her

hope u guys like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
great update.scary nani,really scary😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
part 9

both astha and sojal are leaving
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
nice updAte
Nani is scary
continue soon

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