OS Jaan ka Dushman *UPDATED PART 9 PG19* - Page 6

Loved it! You're a natural. Please continue!

awesome update
loved it
so anjali got to know about aditi
hope she says to shlok soon

Awesome update. Anjali is superb. Loving this shlok. Really nice update. Waiting of the next update.

dear it was emotional
. happy to see shlok emotions.. n aditi ka bhanda fod do..

Wow really nice update it's nice that Anjali and Shlok are working together, finally Astha woke up, can't wait to read what happens next

I am enjoying writing this story so much, I feel obligated to update regularly, reading all your comments encourages me immensely, I hope you guys enjoy this next part as well

Part 5

"ASTHA" Shlok yelled rushing forward pushing all the nurses out of the way and engulfing her in his arms. "Shlok" Astha cried into his chest holding onto his shirt afraid he would disappear if she let go. "Shlok aap mujhe chod ke kahin mat jaana" Astha said burying her face deeper into his chest breathing in his scent and letting it wash over her soothing her nerves. "Kabhi bhi nahi Astha main yahin hoon" Shlok said tightening his hold on her and placing a kiss on her head.

The team of doctors and nurses left and informed everyone waiting outside that Astha was awake, excited Niranjan, Anjali and Varad ran into the room.

"Astha" Anjali cried "Tum theek tho ho"

Realizing the family had come in Astha and Shlok adjusted themselves but were still holding on to one another.

"Astha beta yeh sab hua kaise?" Niranjan wondered

"Haan Astha achanak yeh accident kaise ho gaya" Varad asked

"Baba, Bhai voh hum..." Astha moved closer to Shlok and tightened her grip on him. Anjali turned and noticed Aditi standing in the doorway, she positioned herself so she was blocking Aditi from Astha's view urging her to speak up "Bolo Astha kya hua darne ki koi baat nahi hum sab hai"Anjali assured.

Aditi not wanting her game to be up came around Anjali "Astha tum theek tho ho pata hai hum sab kitna darr gaye the". Looking up at Shlok Astha spoke "Shlok jab tum office gaye hue the jab meri ankh khuli toh Aditi ne kaha ke voh bore ho chucki hai aur ushe bhook bhi lagi hai, usne gol gaape khane ki zid ki maine bahut kaha ke apka intezar kar lete hai, par akhir mein usne uski baat manvali aur hum jab gol gappe kha kar vapas aa rahe the tab..."

"Tab hi truck ne Astha ko takar mar di" Aditi interjected

Frustrated Astha tried to tell everyone what had actually happened when the nurse came in "aap sab bahar jaiye humhe patient ki dressings change karni hai phir aap unko ghar le jaa sakte hain, bas dhyaan rakhna key eh abhi bhi kamzor hain aur inhe aaram ki zaroorat hain" Everyone filed out slowly but Astha and Shlok wouldn't let go of each other

"Astha, Shlok bas bahar he ho ga tab tak main tumare paas hoon dressings change hote hi voh undar aa jayega" Anjali said holding Astha's hand comfortingly

Shlok placed a kiss on Astha's forehead "main dressings ho jaane baad aata hoon" Astha nodded slowly and reluctantly let go of his hand. After Shlok had left the nurse said she would be right back and went to grab new dressings leaving Astha and Anjali alone in the room

"Astha tum sab ko poora sach nahi bata payi na?" Anjali probed and Astha shook her head "Nahi Sasu Bai" Anjali nodded and spoke "Mujhe sab kuch batao jab se tum log ghar se nikle the kya kya hua aur kuch chupana nahi"

Astha nodded and told Anjali everything that happened from the car losing control to the accident "Sasu Bai Aditi ne mujhe dhaka diya tha aur dhaka dene se pehle "Shlok kabhi tumara nahi ho sakta Astha" kaha mujhe" Astha cried Anjali wiped her tears "roh mat Astha aur ho sakhe toh mujhe maaf kar dena, jab se Aditi hamare ghar mein aayi hai mujhe voh hamesha kuch ajeeb si lagi hai aur jab usne tumare saath Goa aane ki baat ki toh mujhe ushe rokna chaiye tha" Anjali cried "Toh shayad aaj tumhe yeh din na dekhna parta"

"Nahi Sasu Bai iss main apki koi galti nahin hain Aditi bahut hi chalak itne din hum sab ke saath rahi phir bhi hum sab ko uski asliat ab tak nahi pata chali aur shayad agar mujhe kuch ho jata kabhi na chalti" Astha said

"Astha yeh tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho" Anjali scolded "Kuch nahi hua tujhe aur nahi ho ga"

Astha and Anjali quickly wiped their tears as the nurse returned with the new dressings. After the dressings were changed and the nurse and Anjali helped Astha change into a new sari, Shlok rushed back to the room, "Ghar chalien Astha?" Astha nodded happily and Shlok lifted her into his arms "Shlok yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?"

"Kya kar raha hoon agar mandir ki seeriyan chad sakta hoon tumhe godh mein le kart oh gaadi tak toh le jaa hi sakta hoon na" Shlok teased Astha smiled as she wrapped her arms tighter around Shlok's neck and rested her head on his shoulder "Theek hai chalo"

As Shlok carried Astha out of the room Aditi came forward with a wheelchair "Voh Shlok maine Astha ke liye wheelchair layi hai gaadi tak jaane ke liye"

Shlok looked angrily at Aditi and tightened his grip on Astha making sure she wouldn't fall before kicking away the wheelchair "Tumhe Astha ki koi fiqar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai kyunki Astha ki fiqar karne ke liye uska pati aur uska parivaar dono hai samaji tum" Shlok informed before walking away.

When Shlok got outside Varad, Niranjan and Anjali were standing next to two cars; one was the car they came in and the other was Varad's car

"Varad tumare Baba tumari gaadi chala lenge tum Shlok aur Astha ko unki gaadi mein le aana" Anjali instructed "Aur gaadi dhyaan se chalana Astha ko koi taqleef na ho"

"Jee Ayi aap fiqar mat kijiye main sab sambal loonga" Varad promised

Shlok helped Astha into the backseat of the car, Aditi started to head over to their car when Anjali stopped her "Tum hamare saath hamari gaadi main chalo"

"Jee aunty" Aditi said reluctantly getting into the car.

Shlok was riding in the backseat with Astha who had fallen asleep in his arms almost as soon as the car took off but Shlok was still restless who was behind all this so much had happened to Astha lately he thought. I am going to kill whoever it is that tried to hurt her thought angrily

"Shlok sirf mera hai" Astha mumbled in her sleep "sirf mera" Shlok looked down at Astha and saw she was mumbling in her sleep he gently shook her awake "Astha tum theek ho" he asked worriedly. Astha looked around and saw that she was safe Shlok was with her and Varad Bhai was driving the car Astha nodded and slowly sat up with Shlok's help "Shlok, Bhai mujhe aap dono ko kuch baatana hai" astha said quietly and Varad slowly pulled the car over so they could hear what Astha had to say

"Kya hua Astha?" Varad asked turning to face Astha "Tum theek tho ho?"

"Main theek hoon mera matlab main ab theek hoon par joh mere saath hua voh ik haadsa nahi tha" Astha began looking at Shlok who wasn't saying anything but had a strange look on his face

"Kya haadsa nahi tha?" Varad asked confused

"Bhai mera accident nahi hua tha jab main aur Aditi gol gappe khane gaye the toh usne mujhe "Shlok kabhi tumara nahi ho sakta Astha" keh kar uss truck ke samne jaan bhooj kar dhaka diya tha" Astha informed them tears running down her cheeks. Shlok quickly pulled Astha into his arms trying to keep his anger under control so he wouldn't scare her.

"Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho Astha?" Varad said shocked "Aditi aaisa kyun karegi?"

"Kyunki voh mujhe aur Shlok ko alag karna chati hai" Astha cried "Pehle jab voh Shlok ke paas aane ki koshish karti thi mujhe lagta ke na jaane main kya kya soch rahi hoon lekin dheere dheere sab samaj mein aagaya jab usne kaha "Shlok kabhi tumara nahi ho sakta Astha" main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi ke voh aaisa karegi mere saath" Astha cried "Mujhe Shlok se alag..."

"Humein koi alag nahi kar sakta Astha" Shlok broke his silence looking into her eyes "Hum dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta aur rahi baat iss Aditi kit oh usse toh main dekh loonga" Shlok held her closer in his arms "tum soh jao aur fiqar mat karo main sab sambal loonga"

"Hum sab sambal lenge Shlok" Varad interrupted "Main tum dono ke saath hoon" Shlok smiled he knew his brother would always be there "Jee Bhai" Shlok nodded as Varad started the car and headed home

When Shlok thought Astha was asleep "Varad Bhai iss ka matlab pechle dino mein Astha ke saath jo kuch bhi hua hai usske peeche Aditi ka haath tha" Shlok began "uss din Astha ki sari ko aag lagna, holi ke rang mein kerosene ka hona, aur phir jab hum teeno Goa aa rahe gaadi ka aaise nikal parna jab ke maine toh hand brake kheecha tha"

"Main soch bhi nahi sakta tha ke Aditi aaisi ladki nikale gi" Varad said "Par Shlok voh Baba ke dost ki beti hai humhe joh bhi karna hai soch samaj kar karna hai"

"Agar voh Baba ke dost ki beti naa hoti toh main usse jaan se hi maar deta" Shlok gritted his teeth. Astha who had been awake and just resting her eyes tried to control the tears from falling she couldn't believe everything Aditi had done to try and separate her from Shlok especially after Astha had always treated her with such respect and kindness, always playing things off to her not knowing any better but here she was taking advantage of Astha's kindness to separate her from Shlok going so far as to try and take her life.

IN NIRANJAN/ANJALI/ADITI CAR

"Anjali main bahut kush hoon ke Astha bahu ab theek hai" Niranjan said as he drove along "Ji Sahb" Niranjan glanced at Anjali "aap kuch pareshan lag rahi hain" Anjali looked at Niranjan "hum soch rahe the ke sab aachanak se kaise ho gaya Astha ke saath, pehle Goa jaate waqt gaadi ka yoon nikal jaana aur phir yeh haadsa" Niranjan nodded "yeh toh hum bi soch rahe the Shlok kabhi aaisi laparvahi nahi karega gaadi ke saath aur phir Astha bahu ka phir se gaadi ke saath hi accident" Aditi who was asleep in the back was oblivious to the conversation

"SAHB GAADI ROKIYE" ANJALI SCREAMED

NIranjan slammed the brakes and brought the car to a suddent halt causing Aditi who had been lying down across the backseat to fall. "Anjali..." but Anjali had already gotten out of the car and was running to a woman lying in the middle of the road. Niranjan quickly got out of the car and ran after her, when he got closer he was shocked "JYOTI" he screamed as he ran to his daughter

"SAHB DEKHIYE NAA YEH ANKHEIN KYUN NAHI KHOL RAHI?" Anjali screamed hysterically Niranjan knelt down "Jyoti" he tried shaking her gently " ADITI PANI LAO" he roared at Aditi who hadn't gotten out of the car, she quickly ran over and he grabbed the bottle from her and sprinkled water on Jyoti's face "Jyoti ankhein kolo Baba hain" he tried

"Jyoti ankhein kol na beta" Anjali cried as she held Jyoti's head in her lap caressing her face, she would never forgive herself if anything happened to her.

Varad suddenly stopped the car "Baba ne gaadi yaha beech sarak kyun roki hui hai" he wondered "Chalo dekhte hain" Varad said getting out of the car Shlok told Astha who had woken up to stay in the cr and lock the doors he leaned into the front seat and grabbed the keys from the ignition "Lock the door Astha" Shlok said as he ran over to see why his Baba had stopped the car in the middle of the road, he was shocked to see Varad lifting Jyoti Tai into the backseat of his Baba's car ckly filled him

"Tai ko kya hua aur voh yahan kaise" Shlok asked worriedly, Varad quickly filled him in on what he knew and they rushed back to the car quickly getting in and following their Baba's car.

PRECAP

Niranjan asks Anjali to call Abhay and ask how Jyoti is

"Haan Ayi Jyoti toh apne kamre mein undar soh rahi hai" Abhay replies "Main usse bol doonga apne phone kiya tha"

Wow. So the vamps true colours shown. Loved the update. And with a surprising twist. Waiting...do update.

Another amazing update thank now hopefully NA will find out truth about Aditi and Abhay. Hope Joyti will be ok

Read the last 2 chaptrs at once..lvng the progres of story! Plz do mentn y aditi wants to separate ashlok! Cont soon😳

Oh dear. I totally loved the last update. Shlok showing how much he cares for his wifey was just adorable. Mother bear and baby bear have also figured out to the culprit behind honeypots accidents. And as a twist in the Tonga, Jyoti has been found on the road...please update soon! I'm going to spontaneously Combust because of the anticipation! !!!!