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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Very emotional update. Astha is eternally good isn't she? Hope nothing drastic happens to any of them, including the baby...thanks for the PM. love the pictures. They add another dimension to the story...

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

A very touching update meera.
Just loved astha and her dialogues.

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ishmanruhi
AWESOME DEAR!!!!
IT WAS SHORT BUT SUPERB

thank u sooo much dear...😛

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Aastha found Shlok in an unconscious state n is shattered.Gld that Karan is understanding.Aasha wants 2 b with shlok.She fell unconscious near Shlok.Oh!hope both of them will b fine in d next update

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ASRKKGfan

@ASRKKGfan

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Nice update.. Eagerly waiting for next part

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

just read chapters 2-4...nice story, my hindi is very bad so i didnt understand a lot of but i think i got the main jist...liked how much he was missing aastha, and also how varad talked sense into him

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crazygul

@crazygul

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

sabr ka intehaa !! lengi chitrlekha..

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athmi

@athmi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Beautifully written ⭐️

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Wooowww dear Awesumm thnks for pm😳

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: meerab...
thanks a lot sweety...
and its a fiction dear...anything can happen to introduce a hatke track...so in fiction sweety pregnancy main bhi shaadi ho sakti hai...😆but not in real life...😛

in pregncy shadi cn be done bt the rituals r altrd a bit!

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