Ashlok OS:~**The Fire Burning Within..**~,Part-5(FINALE),page-25... - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar what did I jus read ☺️ 🤣
Mann I love possessive talk
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very very beautiful update!! tremendously loved it - and with such a talent for detail and description 👏 Loved how you showed shlok realize what the fire burning within truly meant. And as always look forward to more of your work!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

[NOTE:Hi friends!😛Feeling a bit better,so here I am wid da finale..😉
Uh so okay It's a bit hot piece,and those who gets offended plz stay away,and those who are not read on..Okay I'll confess dis is da 1st tym I wrote dis kinda scene,dnt be shocked,I mean da complete scene,😆 so plz forgive my mistakes and correct me where I went wrong..😳
Nd yes if it does sound nasty,do tell me plz..I'll edit it..Plz do comment frnds.😊Thank u!Love u all!🤗
Tehsina(Sina)..❤️]



Part-4,page-18:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101958068


Part-5.

Astha was shocked when Shlok picked her up in his arms,but strangely she did not feel scared..

She held onto his coat front,and staring up into his dark handsome angry face,as if mesmerised even by his anger,as he strode to somewhere with her in his arms.

He always had this strange effect on her,she realised with a shaken breath..

It was strange but true..

She did not know why,he always manage to affect her like this,but it did..Everything about him seemed to move her..Maybe that is why she was still with him,despite all the hatred he declared of feeling for her..

Maybe that is why she had come here,in this party,where she could have easily refused to come to..

But in some part of her mind,she also knew that she had wanted to arouse some feelings in him,or to take his anger to its pinnacle and then see what happens after that..That is why for the first time she had dressed so daringly tonight.

TRADITIONAL,he had said..

She had worn a traditional saree alright,but yet not in a conservative way..Today she had felt she wanted to be daring..

And now she was seeing the result in the form of her menacingly cold husband,who was carrying her in his arms after an era almost,it seemed to her..

Finally Astha's trance was broken, as Shlok banged and closed a door shut..

And then before she could understand what was happening she was thrown unceremoniously onto a bed..

She looked around and realised she was in the bedroom that were given to them during their stay here..

Shlok walked forward and switched on the bedside lamps,and then locked the door..

And as he turned back towards her,Astha could feel thrills of fear and excitement running through her body at the same time,and she tried to get up from the bed..

Slowly he walked towards her,a perfect predator circling round its caught and trapped prey..His dark eyes glittering with cold rage,his tall muscular body emanating waves of anger just from its mere stance..

Finally she stumbled onto shaky legs,and manged to lose her high heeled shoes in the process..

That gave her the disadvantage of again looking extremely tiny in comparison to his large tall brooding self.But Astha was not ready to get scared or atleast give him the pleasure and satisfaction of knowing that he had unsettled her..

She took a small step behind,but managed to stop herself from going back further..

"Why did you bring me here Shlok?There is a party going on down..Shouldn't we be there..?"She asked in steady voice,even surprising herself how strong she sounded..

He did not hear,or actedof not hearing,as he walked closer..Still a cold angry mask on his face..

She took another small step back,and gulped down the knot of tension in her throat..This time she was not ready to back down..It was enough that he had tied her in this hate marriage..She was sick and tired of it all,already..

"You don't..You don't scare me a bit Shlok..What are you playing at?"She asked in a slightly shaken voice this time..

The hint of an evil smile came at the corner of his full lips for a second,and then vanished..That second was enough for her to get her angry and hold onto her temper,her only weapon to fight with him..To fight with the man she still loved in her heart..

The realization made her intake a sharp breath,as she stood still looking up at him coming closer and closer..

And then as he pushed her back up against a wall,and stood breathing down heavily with anger in his large dark eyes,all she could feel was wonder..

She did not know how she could love this man,who had done his best to make her life a hell,but she did..She just did..

Shlok's face came closer,his expression menacing,and Astha could tell he expected her to squirm and finch and ask him to set her free..But Astha stood still,not breaking his gaze for a second..

And then she could feel his hot breath on her face,which made her bodt turn hot and cold all at the same time,as liquid pleasure started running through her body..

"How dare you Astha?!How dare you-.."He inhaled a sharp hissing breath not able to complete hiss sentence,as rage emanated out through every pore of his body,looming over hers,and nearly touching hers..

"How dare I what Shlok..?"Her voice though soft,sounded confident than ever..Her calmness seeming to pierce his armour of wrath and unsettle him..

"How dare you-..With..that man..Men..You are my-.."Again he did not complete his sentence,his breathing heavy,and somehow Astha felt love for him for no reason at all..

He was jealous..!She could tell it!And that meant..That only meant he was not after all as uncaring as he acted to be..Or maybe,even he-..

He stopped herself from thinking the dangerous thought,that would surely create havoc in her life..That one thought was enpugh to build up her life,or break it into pieces and tatter it to shreds again..

Somehow she could read the hurt feelings he was trying to mask with his anger,and Astha instantly felt her heart and reserve break..She had to reassure him..

Without thinking she raised her one hand and gently touched his one beard roughened cheek..

"Shlok..It' not the way you are thinking..He..Sanjay is a college friend..When you came,we had jus met..And so hugged in excitement..I don't have anything for-.."

"SHUT UP!!!STOP LYING!!!And why should I care what you feel for the bas***d or any other guy?!!You are most welcome to him,and any Tom,Dick or Harry that take fancy on you!"He gritted out angrily,and suddenly let go of her and turned to leave..

Astha did not know what made her do the thing she did next..

"Afraid Shlok..?"Her soft taunting voice made him stop in mid-step.

"What..What rubbish are you talking about..?"His hesitant tone made Astha realise she was finally going the right way..

Slowly she took shaky steps to where he was standing rigid,with his back turned to her..

"Afraid to give in to your heart..?Afraid to face the truth..?Afraid to accept the reality..?"Her words seemed to make him shudder slightly..

Astha suddenly forced him to face her,and snalked her hands round his neck,turning him to a complete stone in shock.

"This is me Shlok..Astha Shlok Agnihotri..Your legitimately married wife..And I dare you..If you are not afraid..Then..THEN KISS ME!"Her words fell like bomb in the lamp lit room.

Shlok stared down at her beautiful face,completely stunned by her words..

Then his eyes moved down to her lips..Lips coloured to perfect rosy pink,and inhaled a staggering breath..He was losing control on himself and his emotions..And he could not afford it..

Her proximity,her provocative words,her seductive stance everything was driving him wild..And he wanted to..

Shlok pulled her hands from round his neck and moved away..

"What rubbish talk is this!"He hissed out and turned to leave..

"You are a coward Shlok..Nothing but..A coward.."Her soft voice sounded broken..And something tugged at his heart..

Was she crying..?!!

But why did it matter to him..?He had seen her cry so many times..In fact he himself had initiated the tears himself,countless of times..So why did it matter to him tonight suddenly..?!

With his back turned to her and his ears perked up, he clearly heard a shattered sob..A very low one,as she was trying to fight her tears..

"It's better I move on with my life..And find someone else..Sanjay is a far better-.."

She never got to complete her sentence,as suddenly she found herself locked in his embrace,and his full lips kissing hers in passionate anger..

His full male lips sucked on hers hungrily,as his tongue licked at the parting of her lips making her gasp out against his mouth with the pleasure of it..

Her hands clenched onto the front parting of his dark coat,as her legs suddenly seemed to have stopped supporting her completely.

His one hand crushed into her soft silky hair,while the other curved round her waist,his fingers deliberately seeking the soft creamy sensitive skin of her waist,making her gasp against his mouth..

He moved his lips off hers,nearly making her moan out in frustration,but the next instant he was kissing her milky white throat,making her gasp out again..

"You are only mine..MINE!Don't you dare talk about any other guy..Or else-.."His harsh words against her throat between kisses,was like sweet music to her ears..And suddenly she wanted to provoke him more..

"Or else..?"She whispered breathlessly as his tongue licked and sucked at the throbbing pulse on her throat..

Shlok reluctantly raised his head and looked down into her eyes with a hungry fire burning in his own..

"Or else..Let me show you,or else.."

Astha gasped out in shock when he picked her up in his arms for the second time that day..And with his dark eyes glittering with hungry fire,he carried her to the large bed,with white bedsheet..

He lay her down gently,and then moved away her aanchal from her bosom..The shudder that clearly passed through her body made his own manhood tighten with need..

He took in her creamy white skin,and heaving full bosom in her tiny black blouse with dark hungry eyes..

Slowly keeping his eyes on her he removed his coat,and started working on his shirt buttons..His each movement seems to make her shudder some more..But she did not shy away or look away for a second,making him harder than ever..He wanted to take her right then and there..

Finally he had removed his shirt,shoes and socks..And then he joined her on the bed with his trousers still on..

He lay down sideways,and looked into her beautiful eyes..

His wife was not one of those too shy girls,and he loved this about her..

Without further thought,he moved his lips to her cleavage and licked there..Making her moan,and dig her nails onto his back..

Shlok was loving the taste,smell an touch of her so much,that he was now wondering if she was for real or just a figment of his imagination..

He slightly moved on top of her,relishing the feel of her soft petite body under him so much,that he wondered how he had stayed away from her for so long..

His hard manhood nudged at her stomach,making her gasp out in reaction,and SHlok nibbled at he cleavage..

His hands curved round her waist..Making small arousing circles on her heated skin with his rough fingers,as she squirmed in pleasure under him..

Shlok moved his lips to her stomach now,his tongue poking into her belly button making her moan softly again,and his hand curved round her bottom through the lower half of her saree..

His hands squeezed her rounded bottom,making her squirm more,and then his hands made their way upwards,and his hot lips followed..

He was on fire,and he wanted her to burn with him..

His hand cupped her swollen orbs through her blouse, with both hands making her gasp again,and then his thumb moved along the hardened peak,which made her rigid first and then shudder with the pleasure of it..

Shlok himself could not hold his throbbing hard manhood for much longer,as he yearned to enter her..

And then her soft hands brushed against his nipples,making him groan out and lose his self control..

With a curse,his lips swooped down on hers,sucking on her sweetness ,and licking at their fullness..A he ravished her mouth with his,his fingers worked at the tiny back buttons of her blouse,and finally he had opened it..

Breathing harshly and barely able to hold himself still as he moved his lips from hers,he removed the skimpy black material,and nearly groaned out loud in frustration,as he saw the black bra she was still wearing..

The lacy material of the bra showed glimpses of her heavenly skin beneath and Shlok's control took another beating..

With a frustrated cure,his lips swooped sown and sucked on her hardened peaks through her lacy undergarment,making her moan out..

His blood boiled with need now,as automatically his hardened body pushed against her stomach..Impatient by now,he quickly got rid of all her clothes,including her small black undies..

The heap of her clothes were followed by his remaining ones,as he joined her on bed again..

This time when he looked down at her,she had her face turned away,and was trying to cover her bosom with her hands,a dark blush covering all of her beautiful creamy skin..

She was more beautiful than he could ever imagine,even in his dreams..How could he stay away from her..?!

Shlok took in a long shaken breath..

This was going to be a long night,he thought as his manhood throbbed painfully with need for her..

He finally lowered his head,and took her lips in his,and kissed her to oblivion,as his hands started weaving their magic on hers again..

Every inch of her skin was kissed,licked and nibbled on by Shlok until finally he entered her with a hard shove..

Her soft gasp of pain was drowned in his mouth as his lips tenderly kissed hers trying to ease away the pain,and then as his body started moving in the age old rhythm of union,the pain in her body was fast replaced by shudders of ecstatic joy..

He took her to the pinnacle of fulfillment and as her body shuddered with it,he joined her there with a loud groan,as both his hands held hers tightly by both sides of her head,all the time..

Finally after making love to her for the second time,a sated Shlok pulled her warm scented body close to him,as he watched her sleeping peacefully hugging him tightly..

As if she trusted him with his life..And Shlok liked it..A soft smile of satisfaction came on his lips at the thought,and he hugged her tighter..His heart swelled up with happiness as she snuggled closer moaning out his name softly against his naked chest,as his stupid body started getting hungry again at her proximity..

He pulled the blanket closer round both their body,and stared at her innocent face..

And then suddenly something hit him..Hit him hard..

This woman he held in his arms,meant the world to him..He finally realised what she really meant to him..!She was not just his wife,or the pawn of his revenge game..She was his life..

He inhaled a long startled breath,and with suddenly shaky hands he brushed some loose locks of hair off beautiful face..

She smiled softly in her sleep,and brushed her cheek against his hand lovingly..Even in her sleep she recognised his touch..

Shlok's heart squeezed out painfully,and he felt the hard wall that he had built up round his heart for years,crashing and crumbling to powder..

He hugged her closer to his heart,and she hugged him back,nuzzling at his chest.and moaning out his name once again..

Shlok's heart accelerated as his already satiated body twitched in need once again..Once again hungry for her..

A smile started at his eyes,and then reached his lips,and then he laughed out loud with the joy of it..

He had finally become free of the ghost of his past..!He had finally fallen in love with his irritating,irksome,beautiful and spirited wife Astha!Or maybe he had fallen earlier but finally realised it tonight..!

He looked down at her sleeping innocent and peaceful face and his heart soared with limitless joy..

Shlok Agnihotri had finally realised The Fire Burning Within him,was not of hatred,but was the result of his love for his wife and his life Astha Shlok Agnihotri..And finally he had found his home and peace in her arms..

~***~THE END.~***~




now girl... I gotta tell you... you reactivated my nirma mind!!😆

this is i think the first time... anybody has ever written about proper love making...

i loved how you actually described them not acting out like animals... they were rather conscious and fully in control...to a certain prespective... which i believe is a very difficult thing to confer...

atleast in this story u gotta write about how they actually undressed!!!😆

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