Ashlok OS:~**The Fire Burning Within..**~,Part-5(FINALE),page-25... - Page 15

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

oh so dat was a college frnd of astha

nd shlok is having a big mu

hw is astha going to clear it

nd before dat wat is shlok going to do with astha

do update soon

Originally posted by: rajani_sid

Very good update...started like a thriller & then..anti-climax! Good to know that there was no criminal involved!! Aastha's college friend. But what is the angry young Shlok going to do next...hopefully it turns out to be something good...

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

sina,u've made me veeba addicit or 2 be more specific a manic🤪 with ur writings,now ashlok!!!! i have 2 say this ur r diving me crazy with ur updates. veeba,ashlok,... i dont have the slightest idea about whats in store for me ,but i know 1 thing whatever it is i will be crazy 4 that 2...

P.S:this is not flattering,whatever comments i had given 2 u, came right from my heart, the above is of no difference

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

wow what an update!

Originally posted by: mayabharathi

you write so well very nice

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

Awsmmm

Originally posted by: pt311288

superb

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

nice update

Originally posted by: lizzy110

lol he turned out 2 be a freindplz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon as possible i wnna know what happens next

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
so its all acting
thanks for the pm