Ashlok OS:~**The Fire Burning Within..**~,Part-5(FINALE),page-25... - Page 11

Omgg really want to know what will happen now!!😃 Amazing updatee, do update soon👏

quite an interesting update...so shlock is to drunk to save her, wonder what will happen, do update soon

[NOTE:Thank u frnds!🤗I know I left u all on a cliff hanger yesterday..😳But am a bit ill so plz bear wid my clumsy writing..I know I cud hv dn better,but smhow cudnt..Really sorry b4hand!😔So plz scroll on..Nd do forgive my clumsiness.Dere r bits I wud hv lykd to change but my brain isnt functioning..😕]

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Astha could feel a strange numbness take over her..As if the fear within her was paralyzing her completely..She could only stare at the lone man in the center of the room working with something..

The entire room looked like the perfect setting for a satanic ritual..The only thing needed was a platform with incantations,and people in black robes,with candles approaching her,the sacrifice of the ritual..

Suddenly Astha felt she could actually see shadows at corners of the room..She blinked trying to calm herself..

And then as her fear was not intense enough she saw something glint in his hand..

Astha was even afraid to blink or even think what it could be..

She tried to look around desperately once again,forcing her muscles to move and her numb brain to think..She had to think of a way out of here..And that also fast..

Something within her urged her on,and inhaling a shaky breath she stood straight..Opening her high heels slowly..If she had to run,she could not manage in those heels..And she had to run..

She looked around for a possible weapon to use on the man..Was there anything lying around..There!A few feet away from her she saw a thick rod lying on the ground..She gulped down a knot of tension and again passed a look at her captor..

She relaxed a bit..He had not turned yet..So she could..

Stealthily she took a step towards the rod lying on the floor and stood still as that was exactly when he turned..

This time all the color left Astha's face as her eyes finally fell on what she had seen glint in his hand..

Her blood chilled to ice and her palm and sole started sweating profusely,as a numb paralysis once again took over her body and mind..

And her captor slowly walked towards her with a large sharp knife held in his hand..

Shlok did not know what actually made him do what he did..

But somehow he kicked open the door to the cottage at far corner of the garden..Something had urged him to walk towards the cottage..And like a blind man shown light he had listened to this urge..

His head still spinning a bit due to too much alcohol intake..The water he had splashed on his face to sober himself had worked somewhat ,but still the intoxication had not left completely..

But the sight that greeted him removed the last remains of his dizziness..

"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN HERE?!!"He screamed out,as hot burning rage removed all traces of intoxication from his mind..

He stared with furious eyes as a stunned looking Astha let go of the young man,she had just been hugging..The same young man who had been dancing with her..

Unbearable rage took over him,as he stared at her still shocked but innocent looking face..She still was not ashamed of what he had just caught her doing!How shameless could she get?!!

He clenched his hand into tight fists in anger..

Astha blinked and tried to understand how Shlok had somehow burst out of nowhere..

She passed a look at Sanjay,who stood with a perfectly calm face staring at Shlok..So Sanjay was right.This room did have a room and that was from where Shlok had entered..

Astha bit her lip in worry,wondering how was she going to explain this Kahdoos man who Sanjay Sharma was..?!!

FLASHBACK..

Astha gulped as the man came nearer and nearer with the knife..And before Astha could blink an eye,he took out an apple out of nowhere,cut it with the knife,put a piece in his mouth and offered Astha another slice,winking at her naughtily at the same time..

A minute passed then another,and that was when Astha finally recognized who he was..

Her mouth hung open in complete astonishment,as she looked him over from head to toe,once again,and laughed out in happiness..

"SANJAY!!!It's you!!!OH MY GOD!!!"

"Of course!That's why I did all these acting!Since my college buddy could not recognize me ,The Great Sanjay Sharma!!!"

"But this room..It has no way out.."

"Of course it does!Stupid girl Don't you know I worked in the movies before I went abroad..?This is all an illusion..The door is blended with the surroundings from the inside..Actually we did a shooting here once,so I remembered this place,and thought to scare you..Sorry yaar..You know me..Could not resist dramatizing it!"He winked at her..Showing her the knife that he had dropped to the floor now..

Astha forgot to get angry,and at the sheer happiness of seeing a close college friend after such a long time hugged him tightly..

And that is when the door burst open..

END OF FLASHBACK..

A seething Shlok walked menacingly towards Astha..

Astha instead of being nervous or afraid turned to the young man,and asked him to leave..

The man hesitated,but Astha insisted telling it was between her and her husband..

Shlok was about to get hold of the man,before he left,to tear him from limb from limb for daring to touch his wife,when Astha's hand stopped him..

"Shlok..Wait..Let me explain.."

Shlok was not in the mood to listen to any explanations whatsoever!As his anger increased at seeing the man leaving,he turned his wrath to Astha..

He would hunt out that scum and teach that scum a lesson later..He could not hide from Shlok Agnihotri anywhere in the world!

But first he had to teach Astha a lesson or two..

"Shlok.."

Shlok looked down at her small hand on his hand,and before she could understand what was about,he picked her up into his arms in a swift move..

Astha's soft gasp was the only sound in the silent room,as Shlok carried her out in his arms..

His face a mask of anger and wrath,that was ready to blast out anyone or anything that would dare to come on his way at that moment..

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Wow shockingly captor turnd out asthas buddy n poor shlok burning wid jealousy😆 lovely update😳 cnt soon!

didnt see that coming!!! College friend...wow love to see aastha get out of this one:)

Huh! Okay...for a minute you scared us all with the knife and everything. And what an update..full of suspense and then the brilliant anti climax, only to again build up the tension levels...oh god are you going to get the next update soon or what?? Awesome! Great work and that's not surprising since it's you isn't it?😛

blessings to you for updating fast... thanx a lott.. lovely update..

another nice update thank you, wow thank god he is a friend

Even if shlok didnt kill him i am surely goin to kill u...till now i was imagining abt all horror movies in the world and it turns out to be her friend my god...

If your apologising for the previous cliffhanger then you are out of mercy for this...simply captivating update. Please do update soon.