SS- HUMSHAKAL, last part updated on 16/2/14 on pg 31 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

aaja fir, do minute baat karle mujhse...
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part 3


shlok came into the room with his laptop

shlok : mili astha ???
astha : nahi. isme eisa kuch bhi nahi he.
shlok : okay. toh me office chalta hu. see you in the evening.
astha : ji???
(shlok smiled at her, he gently ruffled her hair and walked out. astha was
too shocked to respond. she just stood their with her mouth wide open.
but soon reality took over her. she started to get ready and it took her
an hour to convince anjali to let her go. finally she was out of agnihotri mansion.
she took her phone out and dialed the same number )

astha : hello, ha me nikal chuki hu. i'll be there in half an hour.be there on time.
the person : we are already on our way.
astha : okay
(astha took a taxi. unaware of the fact that shlok was waiting for her on his car
just outside their house but hidden to everyone's notice. as he saw astha take the
cab he felt exited,he was feeling that whatever he is going to find out, is going
to be in his favor only.after around 40 minutes of drive shlok's car came to a halt
when he saw astha getting out of the taxi. he waited for astha to get in and after
that he parked his car and followed astha. much to his surprise astha has come to a hotel,
and much to his pleasure it was one of his rare best friend from college, that he still keep
in touch with. he followed astha close by. he saw her enter the restaurant area. she asked
something to a waiter and the waiter pointed towards an empty table around the corner. shlok called
up his friend and fixed something that he wanted. then he saw that astha was calling someone)

astha : arre kaha ho tum log??? me toh yaha aa bhi gayi. aur tum log abhi tak nahi pahunche???
op : bas do minute astha hum traffic me fas gaye he...
astha : okay. but jaldi nikalne ki koshish karo. mere pas zyada waqt nahi he.
op : okay
(a waiter walked toward astha's table and placed a flower pot with lots of roses in it)

astha : mene phool nahi mangaye he???
waiter : mam we are decorating it for valentines day. its a part of finalizing the arrangements.but
if you want then i can take this away.
astha : no need for that.. let it be..
waiter : thank you mam. (the waiter left and astha smiled at the flowers.soon the people whom she was waiting for arrived)

op : hey astha my darling
astha : darling warling sab bad me bula lena.. mujhe lagta he shlok ko sab pata chal gaya he,
ab hum kya karenge arjun???
arjun : arre astha itna kyu pareshaan ho rahi ho pata chale toh chalne do na! waise bhi 6
mahine baad tum logo ka divorce hojayega na.
astha : 6 mahine mujhe uske saamne rehna hena???
op : chill yaar astha
astha : kya chill ananya??? tujhe pata he tumhare dad aur shlok milke ek nayi school bana rahe he.
and woh project blue print pe tumhara naam bhi tha.
ananya: kya?? oh god mujhe toh dad ne sirf itna bataya tha ki naye school ki construction mujhe dekhni he.
ab hum kya karenge vishal???
vishal: mujhse kya pooch rahe ho sab log! mene toh pehle hi mana kiya tha na!
astha :yaar vishal, please abhi tuh hi kuch kar sakta he.
vishal: kya chahte ho tum log, ki me ek police inspector hone ke bavjood tum logo ke is fraud me madad karu?
arjun : oye tu toh eise baat kar raha he jaise humne koi murder kar diya he
ananya: ha vishal, hum jo bhi kar rahe he astha ko help karne ke liye kar rahe he.
vishal: kaisa help huh??? iska pati jo isse pyaar hi nahi karta use pareshaan karke hame kya milega???
ananya: iske chehre pe woh hassi wapis aajayegi jo kahi kho gayi he.
arjun : bilkul sahi ananya. aur vishal yeh baat tujhe bhi pata he ki agar ye saari baate sabko pata chala toh
sabse badi problem mujhe hogi. me us hotel ka manager hu. meri toh job chali jayegi na???
Edited by meera.rajeev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know i should have ended it today but sorry couldn't help it 😳
Edited by meera.rajeev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update meera... loved it sweety...

poor shlok😆...


and ananya and astha😉😛

really a lovely os meera...

the story should be promoted to ss now...😳

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

superb update meera... loved it sweety...

poor shlok😆...


and ananya and astha😉😛

really a lovely os meera...

the story should be promoted to ss now...😳



ss??? are nahi yaar. this will end with two more updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev



ss??? are nahi yaar. this will end with two more updates...

ok dear...waiting for next updates😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

ok dear...waiting for next updates😳



sare confusions door ho gaye???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rbb1

nice update thank you



thank you😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Finally all my doubts are cleared. Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev



sare confusions door ho gaye???

yeah sweety but now want to know about shlok's reaction soon

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