AsHlok OS'---Written In The Skies--- (Astha's Birthday)) - Page 2

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Thanks!😃
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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti


Beautifully written OSšŸ‘

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beautifully written šŸ˜›
a cute lovely love story😳 😳
i loved the last portion a lot😊
well done againšŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Hey beautifully written os...luvd it...thanq for the pm
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Originally posted by: -LECHU-

beautifully written šŸ˜›

a cute lovely love story😳 😳
i loved the last portion a lot😊
well done againšŸ‘ šŸ‘

thanks😊
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thanks😊
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Originally posted by: dafla

Hey beautifully written os...luvd it...thanq for the pm

thanks😊
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such a cute os... lovely... thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written😳
My fav part
"Shlokkk!!" her pitch was overly excited. He hugged her back with one arm behind her back and the other balancing the chocolate larva cake.

"Happy Birthday Love." He whispered in her ears. Astha closed her eyes taking in every ounce of the moment. She broke the hug and hit him hard on his chest.

😳Do write more on ashlok!!

Edited by Aishaa3 - 11 years ago
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That was a superb OS...
Loved the way Shlok confessed finally... Aww Astha actually waited for him...
Loved the last line
"I had to come back for you...before anyone else could take that place in your life I had to make you my wife."
Cute Os!... 😊

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